Love Blooms

Bloom Beneath His kisses Love touches you Daydreams of romance blossom in his arms In quiet solitude of soft caress Beating heart pounds Breath quickens Eyes close Bliss
8-20-21 Double Tetractys 8 Poetry Contest Picture #1
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Kauffman Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 11:58 AM
Jeanne, congratulations on your win with this "soft caress" that illustrates a partner being cherished. Lovely. Blessings!
Mcgee Avatar
September 26, 2021 at 7:06 PM
sounds just right. Thanks Sam for the comments.
Roper Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 6:32 PM
Jeanne, congratulations on your win. Your verse had great imagery, flow, and a change for the second stanza. Thank you so much for writing a verse for the contest. Hugs Eve
Mcgee Avatar
September 11, 2021 at 7:26 PM
Thanks Eve. Loved the choices.
Goldsmith Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 9:37 AM
A beautiful write. Love your line, "Daydreams of romance blossom in his arms." Have a blessed day/weekend...............
Mcgee Avatar
August 29, 2021 at 12:49 PM
Hi Paula, that was the first line I thought of and the rest flowed from there. Thanks for stopping with a comment. much appreciated.
Buhagiar Avatar
August 24, 2021 at 1:00 AM
Smooth and lovely. Best for a win.
Mcgee Avatar
August 27, 2021 at 11:18 AM
Hi Victor. Nice to see you again. and so wonderful to have your vote. :D
Dietrich Avatar
August 23, 2021 at 3:36 PM
ahhh so lovely!!
Mcgee Avatar
August 27, 2021 at 11:18 AM
Hi Andrea...hope all is well. So nice to be back in touch. Thanks for the look see and comment.
Balasubramanian Avatar
August 23, 2021 at 11:43 AM
Lovely write. Reminds me of first romance. All the best for contest
Mcgee Avatar
August 27, 2021 at 11:17 AM
Hi Rama, thanks for the lovely words of encouragement.
Jayasankar Avatar
August 23, 2021 at 10:40 AM
Jeanne...enjoyed reading your romantic write for dear Eve's contest. Thank you for your recent comment on my potd poem... Hugs... ~ Ani
Achara Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 1:21 PM
Reminds me of that first love! Nicely written!
Mcgee Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 3:24 PM
Hi Chetta, Thanks so much for coming and commenting.
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