Love Birds

two hearts become one
harmonious orchestra
sharing the silence
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Dietrich Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 11:31 PM
Ok now my comment is going through. I loved your two most current haiku but could not get my comment through to you
Dietrich Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 11:29 PM
Testing
Allison Avatar
December 29, 2020 at 3:29 PM
so lovely to read this gem again, many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 11:30 PM
Can you tell PM for me that I am unable to post comments on any of the poems. Maybe not here under your comment either
Dietrich Avatar
October 22, 2019 at 5:51 PM
Beautiful came to my mind. I looked underneath and saw that is the same comment I made first time I saw this one. back in march!! This must be where I left off with your poetry, so have a good evening now.
Chiri Avatar
June 12, 2019 at 1:10 PM
So few words could be beautiful yet they are lovely poem! Congrats on your win!;)
Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 10:20 PM
Beautifully crafted Haiku
Krutsinger Avatar
March 27, 2019 at 3:50 AM
Such a lovely haiku; you are nailing "brevity" in a great way, my friend.
Gauthier Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 10:16 PM
Lovely, PM. Congrats on your win.
Mhangwa Avatar
March 8, 2019 at 10:52 AM
Nice haiku, bursting with romance.
Dietrich Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 5:51 PM
Love seeing this one again. Congrats on win.
Cunningham Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 2:01 PM
lovely hakiu P.M , congrats on your win. Tom.
Kendrick Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 9:49 AM
I have read your Haiku and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara
Messina Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 6:55 AM
Beautiful, PM Congratulations on your win. Charlie
Andresen Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 4:22 AM
- Congratulations P.M., on your 1st place in this sweet contest: I Love U 2 :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Callus Avatar
February 27, 2019 at 2:46 AM
Wow! A delightful offering, PM! No need for gl wishes:) Regards // paul
Allison Avatar
February 26, 2019 at 5:26 PM
oh so beautiful PM:-) hugs jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
February 24, 2019 at 3:06 PM
Beautiful!
Kiser Avatar
February 24, 2019 at 2:48 PM
A beautiful Haiku; well done.
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