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Love beyond time

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Not a contest poem. I am out of contests for some time.

 

Time moves on, yet forests stay green in snow or sun. Eucalyptus sheds bark, spreads scent, and stands so tall. Under stars so bright, I see your glowing face. Close to me, beyond the reach of time or fear. Time, my love, will never wait for anyone, Not for ocean waves or for the setting sun. Yet within your eyes, my love stands strong and true, Like the hills that rise near lakes so deep and blue. Time flies past, yet leaves behind its fleeting shade. Your love lingers, shaped by all we’ve done and made. Life is brief, so cherish paths we've walked as one. Love is moments felt—eternal, never gone.

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Date: 2/3/2025 8:30:00 PM
"Life is brief, so cherish paths we've walked as one. Love is moments felt—eternal, never gone." A wonderful close to a beautiful love poem. Time may swiftly pass. But love and memories of a life shared in love, lives on.
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Date: 1/29/2025 1:21:00 PM
Well done, Jay. We should savor each passing moment since life is fleeting.
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Date: 1/29/2025 11:41:00 AM
- Life is short and we must make the most of every day ... a lovely poem, Jay :) - hugs
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Date: 1/29/2025 10:22:00 AM
What a lovely write you have here. I love the smell of Eucalyptus. Oh yes, where does all the time go??? Life is brief when one looks back on it. Have a blessed day writing away.............
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