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Love Betrayed

I gave her my heart and life, but it was such a deep illusion, which cut my soul and being with a knife, I stood by her during trails and diffusion. Due to leadership tussle at my work place, which led to my set-up with a big error, I thought she was there to save my face,... My sentence to six months was a big terror. I believe she`ll stood by to put more pressure, This was not suppose to be my portion, With her love,I`ll serve with all pleasure, At the end,our love will have a wonderful caption. It was like being hit by a hurricane, When I learned that she left with my lass, My Baby,that I cherished more than sugarcane, I wept!,wept like a teenager with a pain in the ass. she left me empty with no money, Faraway to an unknown land by air, Even though I love her more than honey, This treatment is killing and strictly unfair. I doubt whether I can still love again, For my heart is damaged and irreparable, Even if passion and love fall like rain, my love is dead,gone and irrefutable.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/1/2013 3:06:00 PM
I see this is one that won a long time ago. I had commented and congratulated you then and as now, GREAT way to go!!
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Date: 4/1/2013 10:42:00 AM
Congrats on this excellent entry...Donna
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Date: 3/31/2013 9:39:00 AM
Congrats, Olusegun. Excellent. Well done. Happy Easter. Ralph
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Date: 3/31/2013 11:53:00 AM
Thanks!happy Easter to too.
Date: 3/30/2013 11:11:00 PM
Olusegun, Congratulations with your awesome poem in my "Broken Heart" contest. it's a tough and painful life when love is broken. Goodnight~LINDA
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Date: 4/13/2012 7:05:00 AM
a sad tale!! YIKES Light & Love
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Date: 10/24/2011 10:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Everyone Knows" contest Olusegun. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/22/2011 9:02:00 PM
Congrats Olusegun on a super fantastic win with this exciting entry luv.. so happy to read u once again now that PS is running smoothly again..luv..
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Date: 10/22/2011 1:26:00 PM
Congrats, Olusegun. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 10/22/2011 8:47:00 AM
I can feel the pain that you have displayed here. Thank you for sharing. Congratulations on your win
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Date: 8/28/2011 1:35:00 AM
what a story, Olusegun. You bared your soul on this one. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 8/25/2011 3:16:00 PM
Well done. I enjoyed your entry. Tony
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Date: 8/25/2011 2:52:00 PM
Very, very sad. congratulations on a big win. Joyce
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Date: 8/25/2011 2:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Constance's "A Fragment of Life" contest Olusegun. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/25/2011 12:22:00 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 8/25/2011 11:14:00 AM
many congrats on an exciting win with this excellent entry for the contest with great expression and feeling luv..
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Date: 8/25/2011 10:05:00 AM
hey Olusegun congrats on your win, David
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