Love Belies

Love belies

Pricks deep into heart,
Hurts the tender emotions,
Is love mere word?
Belies the hope and the faith,
Languorous with first cold night !



August 25th, 2014
For contest 'Hope faith and love tanka' by Regina Riddle

Awarded 4th place
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Mehta Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 1:49 AM
Congrats on a creative write on all the three, Dr. Upma.
A  Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 4:53 PM
Hi Dr Upma, Congratulations, on your winning Tanka, SKAT LOVE
A   Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 2:02 PM
Dr Upma, Congrats on your tanka, it's all about "Hope, Faith and Love" always~ Linda
Sietesantos Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 1:16 PM
Beautiful write for a beautiful well-deserved win! Congratulations, Dr. Upma! Pandita
Allison Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 11:41 AM
Many congrats on your win with this great tanka Dr Sharma:-) hugs jan xx
Manassian Avatar
August 25, 2014 at 3:18 PM
Something to contemplate, my dear Dr Upma...Good luck! :) Hugs
Kendrick Avatar
August 25, 2014 at 10:58 AM
Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Reads like winning material to me..Way to go with this one..With some love is just mere words spread around like cheap mayonnaise..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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