Love Attention

I am not feeling well these days
I wish it was forever between you and me
I wish the glory of your love and mine goes to the sky
It's a pity that we are only close to each other
The road is one-way from my side
Don't tell me the moments, everyone is at war with me
When you said about the logic of love
Time sawed between us and drew its blade on my body
I did not take anything from your garden
Life has no meaning without you
Love me read my attention
Everyone is talking
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Sambourne Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 5:00 PM
A powerful write, Hossein. There often is a high need wish in a relationship to acknowledge a "love me read my attention" - something that affirms us + our feelings while seeking reciprocity. Terrific work. Brian
Keshavarz Amandi Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 6:23 AM
Thank you for your attention to my writing, dear Brian
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