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Love Attention

I am not feeling well these days I wish it was forever between you and me I wish the glory of your love and mine goes to the sky It's a pity that we are only close to each other The road is one-way from my side Don't tell me the moments, everyone is at war with me When you said about the logic of love Time sawed between us and drew its blade on my body I did not take anything from your garden Life has no meaning without you Love me read my attention Everyone is talking

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Date: 8/20/2023 5:00:00 PM
A powerful write, Hossein. There often is a high need wish in a relationship to acknowledge a "love me read my attention" - something that affirms us + our feelings while seeking reciprocity. Terrific work. Brian
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Sam Keshavarz Amandi
Date: 8/21/2023 6:23:00 AM
Thank you for your attention to my writing, dear Brian

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