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Love At First Sight

It is that moment we lively remember, When you and I first saw at a park. Then, nature's grandeur was vividly amber, When our eyes met and caused that spark. Then, our love was steadily drawing on our faces, Like a shadow moving into the sunbeam As we were trying to earnestly find the right bases To unlock our brewing feelings, as a team. As the moment continued to linger Nothing between us seemed complicated. We wouldn't dare let anything wither This lively love that was dedicated. This new found love gem that we both knew Was budding from its stem as fresh as few.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/5/2019 12:50:00 PM
Nothing beats love at first sight, Mpho! Your sonnet is a fitting tribute to such an emotional moment. // paul
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Date: 3/6/2018 8:17:00 AM
Beautiful to ears, I love it and well done. I like " our love was shining in our faces "
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