Love At First Sight

Do you
                        Intend to kill
                  With those beautiful eyes,
                With a mischief smile directed 
                             At me?
             Like a sharp arrow from love bow,
                   Masked behind innocence,
                         So clearly aimed,
                              At me?



Date written 06/05/2020
2nd placement
Sponsor Jenish Somadas
Contest Name	Let the Pens Flow - Butterfly Cinquain |

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 5/18/2020 6:34:00 AM
love at first sight - what a charming poem Krish:-) Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 5/18/2020 7:13:00 AM
Thanks Jan, pleased you like it. God bless
Date: 5/15/2020 2:14:00 PM
Nicely done, Congrats on your win
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 5/15/2020 3:32:00 PM
Thank you Joseph May!
Date: 5/14/2020 10:50:00 PM
Zing! Right to the heart, Krish! Love the creative question at the end of each section. Congratulations!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 5/14/2020 11:19:00 PM
Thanks Sam! Pleased you like it. Good contests generate good poems. This one did inspire us to write!:)
Date: 5/14/2020 9:28:00 AM
lol.. Are you still alive?Great write Krish.. Congrats...
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 5/14/2020 9:31:00 AM
Thanks Jenish! Just about, lol! Nice contest! Pleased I am amongst the winners!
Date: 5/14/2020 5:29:00 AM
This brings back the nostalgia of the playfulness of love in the initial phase beautifully. Congratulations on your placement Krish! :)
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 5/14/2020 9:32:00 AM
Thanks Aditi. Some of the best moments in life! Best wishes
Date: 5/7/2020 9:04:00 AM
Ooh! What an image! So full of twists and turns... Methinks she just intends to lure you, hook you, and swallow you whole. lol. Great one, Krish! :) gw
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 5/7/2020 1:46:00 PM
Thanks Gershon! Love! Young love! First love! Most beautiful thing in the world!!
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