Andrea Dietrich Poet Verse

Love At First Sight

I met him in a time and place
so long ago! His handsome face
I longed to touch. It was at night.
He saw me too - love at first sight!
We danced a while and ever since,
we've been together. As my prince,
he has my heart. It's only right
we share this life in love's embrace.

June 22, 2018 For Silent One's Seven lines of romantic heaven Poetry Contest
This is Septilla Form: aabccba with Iambic tetrameter.

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Susan Gentry July 31, 2018 at 10:22 PM Oh I like this. Congratulations on your win. I'll have to try this. :)

Sandra Haight July 31, 2018 at 5:09 PM Beautifully written, Andrea! Congratulations on your fine placement! Hugs, Sandra

Andrew Battaglino July 31, 2018 at 3:31 PM Nice poem. Smooth and very romantic.

Line Gauthier July 31, 2018 at 2:59 PM Lovely, Andrea. Beautiful rhythm. Congrats on your podium finish.

Dale Gregory Cozart July 31, 2018 at 11:38 AM I think you're probably the most proficient--and prolific--"forms" poet on this site. Congrats. Andrea Dietrich July 31, 2018 at 3:28 PM thanks so much, Dale. It's what I try to be (proficient and prolific) . I am not top-notch with outstanding imagery like you are. If only i could be my best in all three!!

Barry Stebbings July 31, 2018 at 11:26 AM Congratulations on your win, Andrea, with this romantic poem. // Barry

John Gondolf June 27, 2018 at 4:41 PM Wow, what a sweet romantic poem, Andrea, and you are such a technician when it comes to form, I love that about your writing. Sorry it didn't make it into the contest, I think Tom had that same issue with one of his poems. JOhn

Pandita Sietesantos June 27, 2018 at 10:03 AM Andie, I am so sorry this amazing, romantic piece did not make it into the contest for it would have been a big winner indeed! It's so mystical when love at first sight becomes the love of a lifetime! Hugs and love. Pandita

Arturo Michael June 26, 2018 at 1:08 AM Nice rhythm and flow here Andrea...All the best my friend

Mark Peterson June 25, 2018 at 9:08 PM You mastered the meter and the form in delicate style, to be read but not to touch or interfere.

Connie Marcum Wong June 24, 2018 at 10:00 PM Me thinks this poem has some truth to it Andrea? : ) Very romantic and nostalgic. Best of luck in the contest. I am not sure if I can come up with something for the contest but hope I can. xxoo Andrea Dietrich June 25, 2018 at 3:40 PM yes, it's pretty much true, Connie. I can't believe this. I entered it in the contest and it did not go through!! In my contest area, it's not showing as entered, but I know I entered it. It disturbs me because it has gotten hardly any reads!!

Caren Krutsinger June 24, 2018 at 1:15 AM This is darling, a winner for sure.

Susan Gentry June 23, 2018 at 4:05 PM Lovely, Andrea. :)

Judy Ball June 23, 2018 at 7:14 AM Lovely Andrea. Wonderful rhyme, rhythm and verse. Excellent. A sure winner. God Bless, JB I'm finally back now. My eye surgeries are all done and it's a bright new world. So far no more headaches.

Vijay Pandit June 23, 2018 at 6:20 AM A blessing granted to only a select few. And you, Andrea, always rank among the select few..Best for a long happy life and a BIG win.

Arthur Vaso June 23, 2018 at 2:03 AM oh Andrea!!!! I keep reading these titles and thinking wow a poem about me!!!! :( loved this none the less!!!

Tom Cunningham June 22, 2018 at 9:45 PM Beautiful memories Andrea. Good luck. Tom