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Love At First

You're my love at first sight Love even just a might Love though there's a fight You're my love that has never flight Love that is so bright Love until the night You are my love at first sight Love although it's not right

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Anand Parmale
Date: 4/6/2016 9:32:00 PM
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Why is love not right,Hansi? It is perfectly alright.... Go for it....Your parents won't get to know about it....
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Bl Devnath
Date: 4/2/2016 5:37:00 PM
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Why not right my lovely friend. True love is always right. Nice poem. Loved always, bl
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/2/2016 2:03:00 AM
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Curious why it's not right, when you seem so giddy about her. I suppose it's up to our imagination to envision the rest of the scenario ;) Enjoyable read ... if it were me I'd probably call it a mono-rhyme though, since every line rhymes the same.
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Constance La France
Date: 4/1/2016 8:05:00 PM
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Hans, I believe in love at first sight, with a glance you can fall in love ~
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/1/2016 7:03:00 PM
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Are you sure it's free verse, Hamsteven? it is a sweet rhyme!
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Eve Roper
Date: 4/1/2016 5:55:00 PM
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Love at first sight is a great thing! Love the pen:-)
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Victoria Georgieva
Date: 4/1/2016 10:56:00 AM
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How lovely, if it is love then it is always right;) Hehe! Lots of love for you, dear friend! :)
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Winged Warrior
Date: 4/1/2016 8:38:00 AM
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Loves many faces...enjoyed it Hansteven...^WW^
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Paul Callus
Date: 4/1/2016 8:23:00 AM
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This is quite interesting, Hans....I feel that this love could be a forbidden love, or else part of a complicated triangle! // paul
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