Hansteven Selfa Poet Monorhyme

Love At First

You're my love at first sight 
Love even just a might 
Love though there's a fight  

You're my love that has never flight 
Love that is so bright 
Love until the night  

You are my love at first sight 
Love although it's not right

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Anand Parmale April 6, 2016 at 9:32 PM Why is love not right,Hansi? It is perfectly alright.... Go for it....Your parents won't get to know about it....

Bl Devnath April 2, 2016 at 5:37 PM Why not right my lovely friend. True love is always right. Nice poem. Loved always, bl

Timothy Hicks April 2, 2016 at 2:03 AM Curious why it's not right, when you seem so giddy about her. I suppose it's up to our imagination to envision the rest of the scenario ;) Enjoyable read ... if it were me I'd probably call it a mono-rhyme though, since every line rhymes the same.

Constance La France April 1, 2016 at 8:05 PM Hans, I believe in love at first sight, with a glance you can fall in love ~

Andrea Dietrich April 1, 2016 at 7:03 PM Are you sure it's free verse, Hamsteven? it is a sweet rhyme!

Eve Roper April 1, 2016 at 5:55 PM Love at first sight is a great thing! Love the pen:-)

Victoria Georgieva April 1, 2016 at 10:56 AM How lovely, if it is love then it is always right;) Hehe! Lots of love for you, dear friend! :)

Winged Warrior April 1, 2016 at 8:38 AM Loves many faces...enjoyed it Hansteven...^WW^

Paul Callus April 1, 2016 at 8:23 AM This is quite interesting, Hans....I feel that this love could be a forbidden love, or else part of a complicated triangle! // paul