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Love At First

Love at first That's how I felt Like a rottweiler Wagging its tail And my crush Disappeared in a flush From that sec I knew it was she First time we met A woman I'd wed someday

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Date: 12/4/2018 8:45:00 AM
Ah! So poetic and sweet; and did you wed her, then? I am sure she loves this one.
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Itumeleng Cangua
Date: 12/5/2018 8:10:00 AM
She is the beat of my heart and yes I married her, we've been together for 20yrs. Thanks for the compliment.