Love at Eight

I waited and I waited just in case she’d been delayed
I stood there feeling foolish, though I acted undismayed 
A movie and some popcorn might have won her pretty smile
And I was very keen and so I waited quite a while

Perhaps she didn’t like the fact I had a missing tooth
I’d heard another one would grow and hoped that was the truth 
I hoped to tell Jemima of the money that I’d found…
“Hid my tooth under my pillow and it turned into a pound.”

Jemima, as my girlfriend wasn’t stretching much belief 
I didn’t have much money, but I had a lot teeth
Losing one seemed scary, but the outcome could be great
Because, you see, the tooth fairy was paying for our date

But then I felt a flutter as Jemima said “Hello.”
She covered up her mouth and said, “There’s something you should know,
I’ve also lost a tooth and now I’m ugly as a witch.”
I said, “And I’m a warlock but, with all these teeth, we’re rich.”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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April 28, 2025 at 3:45 PM
What an adorable write Terry....just loved it! Debx
Proxenos Avatar
April 27, 2025 at 5:56 AM
Oh so cute, I LOVE IT! Love gets younger by the day in today's world! Awesome poem Terry. Blessings, Jennifer.
Dietrich Avatar
April 26, 2025 at 9:07 PM
This is adorable, Terry!! Great little story so well told.
Lane Avatar
April 16, 2025 at 3:47 PM
Such a cutsie, toothless date. Fun to read, Terry.
Flood Avatar
April 16, 2025 at 4:39 PM
Thanks, Lin. I guess anyone under about thirty couldn’t comprehend the notion of eight year olds going ‘out’ on their own. It was a finer, more innocent world back then.
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