Michael J. Falotico Poet Limerick

Love Around the Ocean

The sand is our playground to run..
The ocean brings waves to meet the sun.
The sky of stars gleam.
Now a stage of dreams.
For our love here has begun.

Your face outlined like a water painting.
My hands trace your heart, oh so granting.
Our eyes connect as one.
Bodies dance on sands undone.
We fall as we are swept away , never fainting.


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By Michael J. Falotico

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Kabuteng P.Ink K. April 14, 2011 at 11:47 AM passing by here again to say thank you for leaving such inspiring comments in my poems :) enjoy your day :D & hugs

Dr Hitendra Mehta April 12, 2011 at 4:47 AM Many congrats Michael on notching big win in Linda's Contest with this romantic imaginative piece. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet April 11, 2011 at 1:03 PM Your a joy to read Micheal.Congrats on this 3rd.place win.Oh loved this one.Thanks for the kind congrats on my win.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa

Caryl Muzzey April 11, 2011 at 9:05 AM Congratulations on your third place win with this wonderful write. I enjoyed the read. Caryl

Emma Mantle April 11, 2011 at 5:16 AM Congrats on the well deserved win. Best wishes Em :)

Black Eyed Susan April 11, 2011 at 5:11 AM Very romantic. Congrats on your win.

Carol Sunshine Brown April 11, 2011 at 4:38 AM Congratulations on your win Michael in Linda-Marie's contest "Loveland Limerick". Love, Carol

Harry Horsman April 11, 2011 at 1:45 AM very creative, wonderful. congrats. Harry

Tahera Mannan April 10, 2011 at 10:56 PM Bodies dance on sands undone. Wow Michael, this is fine. many warm congrats.

Nette Onclaud April 10, 2011 at 7:52 PM i knew this would create a stir, michael.. love to see you win high in this tourney!! CONGRATS!! :) huggs, nette

Brian Magness April 10, 2011 at 7:34 PM Congrats on your 3rd place!! Well deserved. Brian

Andrea Dietrich April 10, 2011 at 2:14 PM Congratulations, MIchael. VEry descriptive it was!

Kabuteng P.Ink K. April 10, 2011 at 10:52 AM And I am honored indeed to share 3rd place with you & John-- you definitely disappoint with the romantic writes, Michael :) Way to go for you :) hugs your way & thank you as well for passing by my other poems :)

Gautami Phookan April 10, 2011 at 10:36 AM Beautiful imagery..'ocean brings the waves to meet the sun' and 'face a water painting'..Enjoyed reading this.Congratulations Michael on your 3nd place win ,,Gautami

Joe Maverick April 10, 2011 at 10:12 AM good to see you in the winners circle Michael! all the best.

John Freeman April 10, 2011 at 9:55 AM Excellent entry Michael, Congratulations on your honored third place. Agape, Moses

Debbie Guzzi April 10, 2011 at 8:24 AM LOL no Linda would never faint! OO strong...nice winning tribute here! Light & Love

Dr.Ram Mehta April 10, 2011 at 8:07 AM Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of Linda, Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 10, 2011 at 7:54 AM Congrats Michael on your success in my contest with this stunning entry luv.. thankxx for your ever constant support always .. J.G.

James Fraser March 27, 2011 at 7:17 AM Dreamy Limerick Michael. The sand and the sea has an amazing way of exciting people. It's like a magnet. Have a lovely Sunday....:)

Debbie Guzzi March 22, 2011 at 2:28 PM such romance!! Light & Love

Wilma Neels March 21, 2011 at 9:02 AM MJF, you have done it again.. Splendid write for Linda's contest ;) love WNN

Kaley Carroll March 20, 2011 at 3:26 PM I like it its awsome... thanks for your comment - Kaley

Andrea Dietrich March 20, 2011 at 2:22 PM It's very romantic, Michael, just what Linda loves!!

Carolyn Devonshire March 20, 2011 at 10:22 AM Wow, indeed! The beach makes a perfect setting for passion, Michael. Best wishes in the contest. Love, carolyn

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