Love and Paradise
Love and paradise
met in the red room
when starlight sang
the waltz of time
the night was set
a million years ago
when warmth and affection
were brightly born
"softly" said love
to the rim of pleasure
as they danced
serenaded by a trillion stars
"when we are old
let men say
love and paradise
came one night
and left us joy"
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