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Love and Pain

All betrayers cause deep emotions,
Fearing great heartache in jaunting knowledge,
Love may never overcome pain,
Quailing real sensitivity 
Time umbellate vessels
While X, yields zero

angstdepressionlifelosslostabc

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Doris Culverhouse

February 25, 2010 at 8:47 AM

great poem, i really like the last line!! ABC's are difficult poems.

Jimmy Anderson

February 20, 2010 at 5:42 PM

Hey, Cecil, my congratulations on your winning place in the contest. ....Jimmy

John Freeman

February 18, 2010 at 9:38 AM

Congratulations on your placement, Cecil. Sincere, Agape, Moses

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

February 5, 2010 at 2:51 PM

Dear Cecil, Congratulations on YOUR Well Deserved Win in Mac McGovern's Contest "Anything Goes" Excellent ABC POEM ONE of the hardest Forms to Write (I Think) YOUR POETIC Talent Shines YOUR Pen IS Gold Superb Write ALWAYS...HG

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

February 4, 2010 at 1:14 AM

Very well done with this ABC form, such a challenge but you did great! Congrats on your win with this Cecil :)

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

February 3, 2010 at 3:10 AM

Congratulations Cecil, on your placement in Mac McGovern’s “Anything Goes” Mini-Poetry contest with these creative words. You are in the winners’ circle! Smiles, Dane Ann

Joyce Johnson

February 2, 2010 at 7:48 AM

Congratulations for your win with this clever ABC poem. Love, Joyce

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 2, 2010 at 4:54 AM

Congratulations on your win in the contest Cecil. May you have many more. Love, Carol

Brian Strand

February 2, 2010 at 3:33 AM

Congrats on your recent successes Cecil.Rgds Brian

February 1, 2010 at 8:04 PM

Nice use of this challenging form. Interesting perspective in the last line. Congratulations on being one of the winners in the Anything Goes contest. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 1, 2010 at 4:50 PM

Congrats Cecil on your winning poem in Mac's Anything Goes contest.. wonderful write and a well deserved win.. luv.. Linda-Marie and thankxxx so much for your loving comments on my poetry reads.. much appreciated.. luv..