Love and Lust

The energy pouring out of you right now is surreal.
Like I placed my finger gently in an outlet.
My head thrown back.
My mouth so dry.
My eyes so wet.
But I refuse to cry.
Your fingers tremble graciously when you stroke my lips.
But just as quickly, your open fist tugs wildly at my hair.
This is happening.
Blurry visions of skin on skin.
Pink tongues, brown hair, sharp eyes, wicked smiles.
Intoxication is magnificent.
Your perfume is as if the only liquor in this room.
And I?
I am an alcoholic.
You are a delicate champagne.
I want to pop you loose.
Leave you empty, and drink you in all by myself.
I was never one to share.
I just can’t help but taste the aroma of your presence with my tongue no matter how arousing it might be.
Because that is all that life consists of.
Constant arousal.
Sometimes through the tongue, or stomachs, our eyes, our hearts, and elsewhere.
Where would we be without this beautiful state of being.
I am drunkenly aroused by you, to a lethal point.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 1/19/2014 6:25:00 PM
Lisa,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 1/19/2014 9:43:00 AM
Hi Lisa, it's nice to meet you! :) This was incredibly intense & visceral in its wanton dialect. "I am an alcoholic. You are a delicate champagne". Fantastic line!
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Date: 1/19/2014 8:04:00 AM
your poem is amazing, the ending in the post is awesome, Lisa. , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT"
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Date: 1/19/2014 6:36:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Lisa- I choose your first "Love and Lust" poem and hope you will write many more in the future - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/19/2014 6:08:00 AM
The intensity of passion was felt in every line of this piece. Quite the sensual write.....full of imagery....Very well written...Kudos
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