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Love and Loss

For my birthday , was a puppy , cute and friendly , it became eventually . Fluffy and white , never used to bite , social and active , and never used to fight . But one day , a tragedy happened , my spirits were dampened , and my heart was saddened . I gave him chocolate , A poison to him , His face was dim , And breathless …. I took him to the vet , Where he treated him , I was praying , ‘O Lord please save him !’ And soon he was fine , I know he is a brave doggy , And who’s doggy is he ?? Of course , he’s mine !! :))

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Date: 1/21/2014 9:12:00 PM
Hi Saanvi, of course I'm going to visit you my young friend... I read the poem above. It's a heartfelt moment when open a gift, that brings joy to our hearts... It was a very touching to know how sad you got when your puppy needed you.. Glad, to know God answered your sweet heart.... Goodnight... Linda
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Date: 1/18/2014 9:06:00 AM
Adorable and sweet...Yes, too much chocolate is not good for diggies, but dad used it to teach our doggie tricks--That was eons ago. Lovely write...good luck on gcontest.
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Date: 1/18/2014 8:29:00 AM
Enjoyed the humor in the write, Saanvi
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Date: 1/18/2014 8:03:00 AM
very creative...!!! :)) ...thought your dog was real...great job!!! ;))
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Date: 1/18/2014 6:42:00 AM
- There are "dog chocolate" ..... my dog ??loves it. - A friend (your dog) that never fails! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/18/2014 7:38:00 AM
Anne - Lise , I actually don't have a dog ! Wrote this poem for Charlotte's contest !! :p

Book: Shattered Sighs