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Love and Laughter

Your smile blends with mine
as our laughter cheers the clouds.
Our days sunny be
long as we look for the light-
leave the darkness far behind.



written September1st, 2014

funny lovesmiletanka

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Lucilla Carrillo

September 1, 2014 at 11:42 PM

Hi Deb; I love this. Love should have laughter for us to be happy. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla

Arthur Vaso

September 1, 2014 at 11:40 PM

Beautiful, hope you dont mind it inspired me to write a dark one.

Casarah Nance

September 1, 2014 at 1:36 PM

:) you give me smiles with your poetry. this is a good one deb, big smiles ;)

Carolyn Devonshire

September 1, 2014 at 1:35 PM

Dear Deb, I didn't know you were still posting here, so it's a delight to read your verse again. What a joyful perspective on life you present. May you remain in the light! Love, Carolyn

Jan Allison

September 1, 2014 at 11:40 AM

A beautifully crafted Tanka which made me smile :-) Hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

September 1, 2014 at 6:36 AM

this tanka has a beautiful flow. I love it. Thank you for a fine read.

Demetrios Trifiatis

September 1, 2014 at 5:40 AM

May the light obliterate the clouds and leave the sun of love reign gloriously! An excellent Tanka full of tenderness and anticipation divine, dear Deb!