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Love and Laughter

Your smile blends with mine as our laughter cheers the clouds. Our days sunny be long as we look for the light- leave the darkness far behind. written September1st, 2014

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Date: 9/1/2014 11:42:00 PM
Hi Deb; I love this. Love should have laughter for us to be happy. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
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Date: 9/1/2014 11:40:00 PM
Beautiful, hope you dont mind it inspired me to write a dark one.
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Date: 9/1/2014 1:36:00 PM
:) you give me smiles with your poetry. this is a good one deb, big smiles ;)
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Date: 9/1/2014 1:35:00 PM
Dear Deb, I didn't know you were still posting here, so it's a delight to read your verse again. What a joyful perspective on life you present. May you remain in the light! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/1/2014 11:40:00 AM
A beautifully crafted Tanka which made me smile :-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/1/2014 6:36:00 AM
this tanka has a beautiful flow. I love it. Thank you for a fine read.
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Date: 9/1/2014 5:40:00 AM
May the light obliterate the clouds and leave the sun of love reign gloriously! An excellent Tanka full of tenderness and anticipation divine, dear Deb!
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Date: 9/1/2014 5:06:00 AM
a work's fountain of hope so written magnificently, deb.. what a gem!.. huggs
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Date: 9/1/2014 5:15:00 AM
thank you nette- you are always so encouraging !