Andrea Dietrich Poet Blitz

Love and Kisses

Grant me my wish
Grant me your love
Love me divinely
Love me so true
True and tender
True and strong
Strong and steadfast
Strong and fierce
Fierce like fire
Fierce like flames
Flames that devour us
Flames that are leaping
Leaping my heart goes
Leaping with desire
Desire overwhelms me
Desire is aching
Aching to see you
Aching to touch you
You consume me
You whom I’m wanting
Wanting and longing for
Wanting and needing
Needing you with me
Needing you here
Here I am waiting
Here I will be
Be my Valentine
Be my sweet Darling
Darling, don’t delay
Darling, come soon
Soon you will know
Soon you will feel
Feel as I’m feeling
Feel my embrace
Embrace me with passion
Embrace me all night
Night brings moonlight
Night brings romance
Romance so enchanting
Romance like dreaming
Dreaming I’m with you
Dreaming you’ll give
Give me your heart
Give me your everything
Everything wonderful
Everything sweet
Sweet like your kisses
Sweet like candy
Sweet 
Kisses

Feb. 17, 2017 for Dave Will's Valentine's Blitz Poetry Contest

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Richard Lamoureux March 14, 2017 at 8:56 AM Your husband doesn't know what he's missing Andrea. Great job on the blitz, also congrats on your first place as well.

Jack Horne March 5, 2017 at 5:35 PM Aww, lovely - had to read this to see what a blitz form is like. Have a great week, my friend x

Kim Merryman February 25, 2017 at 3:39 PM Andrea, it is such a thrill to be tied for 1st place with you! Congrats on your top win! Blessings, Kim

Robert Johnson February 24, 2017 at 9:31 AM Please bear with me. When a heart is filled with pain of lost love, a poem like this that is filled with such sweetness and beauty hurts. What's Valentine's day feel like?

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen February 23, 2017 at 8:00 PM Beautiful Valentines Blitz! I hope you ga ve it to your Honey! Congratulations on your first place win. Smiles, Dane Ann Robert Johnson February 24, 2017 at 9:28 AM Well then Andrea, I'm framin' it. :) Andrea Dietrich February 23, 2017 at 8:09 PM are you kidding, Dane Ann? He throws my poems on the floor! He hates the stuff.

Charlie Smith February 22, 2017 at 1:47 PM Romance so grand, congratulations Andrea...

Eve Roper February 22, 2017 at 12:02 AM Back to congratulate you on your awesome win Hugs Eve

CayCay Godwin February 21, 2017 at 7:03 PM WOW, so glad I looked at this contest's placements. Wish I had gotten mine in, was/is a lot like yours. I enjoyed frolicking thru your blitz, it is just great and truly worthy of first place. So happy to see that, feel that! Phew - sent you another Soup, but now all is golden. Congratulations on a worthy and fine win. Hugs ... CayCay

Lukas Ficklin February 21, 2017 at 6:24 PM Beautiful Andrea! I love the very first line - so fitting for Valentine's Day. Congrats

Rob Carmack February 21, 2017 at 5:49 PM Congrats on your win!!!

Jan Allison February 21, 2017 at 2:20 PM oh so romantic Andrea I'm glad I didn't attempt the form I find romance so hard to write ... now if it was poop it would be flowing lol:-) Congrats on your top spot:-) hugs Jan xx

David Bose February 21, 2017 at 1:04 PM Wow, Andrea, that's a fun read. Your top placement well-deserved. Nice, Dave

Agnes Krampe February 21, 2017 at 12:26 PM Coming back with congrats!

Anne-Lise Andresen February 19, 2017 at 3:08 PM - A beauty in all lines, Andrea - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Walker February 19, 2017 at 1:58 PM What a romantic your are.

Matthew Anish February 18, 2017 at 11:19 PM What a fine romantic write! Keep dreaming! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Probir Gupta February 18, 2017 at 8:25 AM Grand, sweet and powerful write ... Good luck and a seven ...

Demetrios Trifiatis February 18, 2017 at 6:58 AM A masterful poetic avalanche dear, Andrea! Good luck and a seven my friend!

Carolyn Devonshire February 18, 2017 at 5:47 AM Ah, so this is what a "poetry blitz" is. A great example with words that create a fast paced profession of love for your Valentine. Well done, Andrea! Wishing you success in the contest.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders February 18, 2017 at 1:04 AM You did this one so well, Andrea! It's the perfect blend of passion and romance. I find this form to be difficult. I wrote 5 blitzes before I was satisfied with the one I posted (and not extremely satisfied)...thanks for the visit today. I know what you mean about the reply button. I hate it too! I was trying to point out the cons of using it in Chris' blog but I don't think I was getting my point across. I had to stop because I felt like I was hijacking his blog. Frustrating!

Lynn Marie February 18, 2017 at 12:06 AM A delightful write brimming with sweet nothings! The rhythm is positively upbeat and left me smiling, feeling like I picked the chocolate with the best filling:-) My best to you in the contest. blessings, Lynn p.s. my first awareness and knowledge of a Blitz, quite amazing I must say; onward to the forms section I go :-)

Eve Roper February 18, 2017 at 12:01 AM Wow!!! A Fabulous Blitz a winner already Hugs

Arthur Vaso February 17, 2017 at 9:13 PM I am gonna put on my Elvis Costume and come kiss you! Loved this! Carolyn Devonshire February 18, 2017 at 5:48 AM LOL Your comment gave me a chuckle, Arthur

Agnes Krampe February 17, 2017 at 8:18 PM I don't think I've ever read an example of a blitz poem - thanks for showing how it's done :) And very well done, as usual :)

Abdullah Alhemaidy February 17, 2017 at 8:01 PM Smooth lovely poem sound like country song :) I liked A 7