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In

the heartbeat

of a poem

. . . dreams take me there . . .

I am drifting beyond reality,

floating in love and bubbles

(a happily ever after)

enchantment of you,

lift me

again

 

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~ Something Dreamy and Romantic ~

Love and Bubbles

* Just a little Scribble *
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Hind Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 11:16 AM
It's just a scribble, huh? Beautiful!
Nicole Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 7:21 PM
Smiling. Yes, it's just a simple scribble. Your kindness doesn't go unnoticed. Thank you, Paige. :) Hugs, Brandy
Pickett Avatar
January 21, 2023 at 2:27 AM
Life has so many moments that have one feeling as if they're floating like the bubbles. Most of those moments, for me are derived from being around and embracing my daughters. Absolutely my happy place. Great poem! Much love! Asavvy1
Nicole Avatar
January 21, 2023 at 2:45 PM
Floating and fluttering are two of my favorite things. It seems I'm doing one or the other. :) Such a happy place indeed, being with your daughters. Knowing that makes my heart smile. Thank you Jared, for your lovely comment. My best to you. :) Brandy
Ray Avatar
May 21, 2022 at 12:16 PM
love the lightness and bewitching allure, wish each of mine were of this caliber....but yes sometimes i also reach this within as you have so magically conjured....thank you Brandy, it is poets such as you that keep poetrysoup what it is...moments away from the eristic within and the world i argue with....it is wonderful when a poem can make me feel i have just boarded a pumpkin carriage minus a shoe
Nicole Avatar
May 21, 2022 at 7:01 PM
Floating in love- ahhh, yes, such a wonderful feeling indeed. (I have always enjoyed drifting in bubbles) Your comment is beautiful. Thank you, Timothy. This thought brings a smile. "i have just boarded a pumpkin carriage minus a shoe." Just like a moment out of a fairy-tale. Your kind words are appreciated. My best to you. :) Brandy
Messina Avatar
January 22, 2022 at 4:28 AM
So glad I read this today, this is so beautiful, Brandy. Thank you for making me feel all bubbly inside, floating high! Have a lovely weekend. Love & Hugs Charlie
Nicole Avatar
January 22, 2022 at 10:21 AM
Fluttering inside, that is the idea of this scribble. To float away in dreamy magic. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. Thank you, Charlie. May you continue to drift and smile in the beauty. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. :) Hugs and love, Brandy
Ashley Avatar
December 13, 2021 at 7:42 AM
Oh Brandy, the beautiful pairing of your dreamy heart and enticing pen never lets me down. I am lifted in the airy romantic enchantment of your poem and swept up and away in breathtaking bliss. Floating in bubbles of love is magical and wonderful and your amazing artistry and sensitive soul captures the feeling flawlessly. May your amorous heart forever drift beyond reality to bring allurement to the poetic page. Inspiring splendor, my sweet friend. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan
Nicole Avatar
December 14, 2021 at 9:29 PM
Dear Susan, I'm in complete awe with your beautiful comment, your words of breathtaking bliss. It is an incredible feeling, floating in love and bubbles. Such a moment will leave you absolutely mesmerized, captivated and in ecstasy. Your thoughts bring a smile to my heart. You humble me, my dear sweet friend, with all your kindness and compliments. I appreciate you. Many wonderful blessings to you and your golden pen. :) Hugs and smiles, Brandy
Baker Avatar
November 6, 2021 at 2:05 PM
Floating in Love and bubbles, I love this line ... I like it there, it's even better than floating on a cloud. I've experienced both in meditations. I also love your image choices for your poems ... very well connected. Bill Baker
Nicole Avatar
November 7, 2021 at 6:56 PM
It is truly magical being in love and bubbles at the same time. Drifting in clouds of cotton is breathtaking in so many amazing ways. I am happy that you enjoyed the photo to match my words and the way the poem is set up. Thank you Bill, for your lovely comment. My best to you. :) Brandy
Juman Avatar
November 3, 2021 at 2:29 PM
This is like on top of the world in-between man and spirit--- I kiss your feet to be there--Very lovely ---Now my pen is getting energized
Nicole Avatar
November 3, 2021 at 8:43 PM
Floating does feel like you are top of the world, in that sense. Your thoughts make me blush. Thank you, Al. It's wonderful knowing your pen is now energized. :) Brandy
Romios Avatar
October 25, 2021 at 1:21 AM
A fave Just grand Pangie
Nicole Avatar
October 25, 2021 at 1:36 PM
Thank you Panagiota, for placing this in your favorites. I appreciate your lovely comment. My best to you. :) Brandy
Wolves Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 3:57 PM
Beautiful poem... so dreamy and warm...
Nicole Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 6:37 PM
Thank you, Robert. Such a wonderful feeling indeed, floating in love and bubbles. Of the many poems that I have written and posted lately, this is my favorite. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy
Ray Choudhury Avatar
October 3, 2021 at 7:12 PM
Your scribble is a charming poem, Dear Poet - filled with dream and romance! Love ~ Mala
Nicole Avatar
October 3, 2021 at 8:31 PM
Thank you, Malabika. There is magic in the air, while floating in love and bubbles. I appreciate your lovely comment. My best to you. :) Brandy
Mcintosh Avatar
September 30, 2021 at 6:10 AM
Wonderful... a piece of your heart. Lifts mine. God bless you friend. Love, Gina
Nicole Avatar
September 30, 2021 at 8:41 PM
Thank you, Regina. I am happy that thoughts from my heart, lift your heart. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Michael Avatar
September 17, 2021 at 2:00 PM
A dream writes of love...sailing through your body and soul...Well done.
Nicole Avatar
September 18, 2021 at 7:49 PM
Love is dreamy and romantic. :) Such a sweet thing to say, Arturo. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. My best to you. :) Brandy
DiMino Avatar
September 15, 2021 at 7:28 AM
This is very charming -- uplifting to the reader as well. Perfect!
Nicole Avatar
September 15, 2021 at 6:41 PM
I am smiling with you saying this is "Charming" So sweet of you to say my words are uplifting. Thank you, Joe. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy
One Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 1:23 AM
I get the dreamy floating feeling here.. I see you have not posted in a while... I hope all is well with you...
Nicole Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 7:43 PM
Me too. :) It is wonderful floating in *Love and Bubbles*. I am doing well. Life has a way of curling around me. I have been grounded lately, but plan to drift in the clouds as much as I can. Very soon. Thank you, Silent One. :) Brandy
Jayasankar Avatar
September 13, 2021 at 11:34 AM
Dear Brandy, I just came here twice, thrice to see if you had written any new poem... I hope you are fine my friend... Thank you so much for your inspiring comment on my poem... Have a lovely day... Hugs... ~ Ani
Nicole Avatar
September 13, 2021 at 9:05 PM
Dear sweet Anitha, thank you checking in on me. I am doing well. Life has been a little emotional lately. My younger brother lost his best friend (of 32 yrs) due to Covid. (He was only 38 yrs old) I am here as I can be. I haven't forgotten about my muse. She will return again soon, I'm sure. You are very welcome, for the comment. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Strand Avatar
September 12, 2021 at 10:15 AM
Shape poetry is always very imagist ,combing words ino pics.Brandy
Nicole Avatar
September 12, 2021 at 8:41 PM
Such a lovely comment. Thank you, Brian. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy
Goldsmith Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 11:12 AM
I love this wonderful "Love and Bubbles" write and fun picture. Bubbles can make one feel like a kid again. Have a fun/blessed day..........
Nicole Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 6:06 PM
Thank you, Paula. Yes, such a moment does make you feel young and carefree. You and your thoughts are appreciated. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Mcconnell Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 7:38 AM
Lovely pen Brandy, good imagery and insight of thought and love your line 'I am drifting beyond reality,' so dreamy indeed. Take care, Gordon
Nicole Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 5:12 PM
Gordon, it is a dreamy feeling when you drift beyond reality. You and your kind words are appreciated. May you have a wonderful week ahead. My best to you. :) Brandy
Darnell Sr Avatar
August 30, 2021 at 9:40 PM
Hi, Brandy! A dreamy scribble indeed. I loved everything about it because it took me to my youth. Thank you, and great penning. Best of Wishes, William
Nicole Avatar
August 31, 2021 at 5:17 PM
Thank you, William. It's such a wonderful feeling floating in dreamy moments. Your thoughts are greatly appreciated. :) Brandy
Bateman Avatar
August 25, 2021 at 5:11 PM
Hello Brandy, This is a dreamy and romantic poem for sure. I really like your use of the "Shape" format here. Very Nice indeed. A magical and heartfelt write for sure!! Enjoyed it very much!! Best Wishes, Gary
Nicole Avatar
August 25, 2021 at 7:57 PM
Hi Gary, it so nice to meet you here in the Magical world of Poetry. Romance is in the air, and so is love and bubbles. :) Thank you for noticing and liking the format and design. Your kind words are appreciated. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy
Lawrence Avatar
August 24, 2021 at 8:00 AM
Love this ..let us all float in bubbles together for evermore !!I love lift me again ... Happy to read your beautiful words Brandy. Have a blessed day. Susan :)
Nicole Avatar
August 24, 2021 at 7:42 PM
Dearest Susan, such a magical moment indeed, floating in bubbles forevermore. Thank you so much for reading this simple scribble. Your thoughts bring a smile. My best to you. :) Brandy
Watt Avatar
August 23, 2021 at 12:14 PM
Brandy, I love the serene, floating nature of this, like watching bubbles slowly drift on a warm romantic summer breeze. Really like the opening, "In the heartbeat of a poem" and the lovely diamond shape you created with your words. Hugs ~ John
Nicole Avatar
August 23, 2021 at 8:48 PM
There is something magical about *bubbles* popping all around, while *floating* in love. Yes, words are felt, in the "heartbeat of a poem" Each tender beat. Thank you, John. This form of poetry creates a diamond shape. You and your thoughts are appreciated. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Jayasankar Avatar
August 23, 2021 at 10:44 AM
I thoroughly enjoyed reading your dreamy write dear Brandy... 'floating in love and bubbles'... beautiful... in these few lines, you have the magic of taking the readers to an enchanted world of beauty... Stay blessed dear friend and have a lovely day... Hugs... ~ Ani
Nicole Avatar
August 23, 2021 at 8:27 PM
Dear Anitha, love is in the air and I am drifting in the magic of each moment. Embracing a happy ever after, while bubbles surround me. Your kind words are greatly appreciated. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Callus Avatar
August 22, 2021 at 2:36 AM
Hi Brandy...:) Stopping by again to read this lovely poem....and to thank you for reading my tribute poem to Carolyn. Hugs // paul
Nicole Avatar
August 22, 2021 at 6:35 PM
Paul, thank you so much for reading this little scribble of mine once again. I am smiling. :) You are very welcome. Your words touched my heart. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Buhagiar Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 12:50 AM
It's been long time since you posted a poem. Pity. I love your enchanted verses. Hugs.
Nicole Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 7:00 PM
Almost a month since I have posted anything. It is a balance between life and recreation. Thank you, Victor. I appreciate you and your kind words. :) Brandy
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