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Under that hallowed moonlit something softly enticed It was two earthly sprites sharing love’s delights..... lips locked in kisses and bodies entwined like twisted sheets the glow of sweat revealed everything. Staring at each other's face lying in each other's arm taking deep breath in ocean seemed satisfied in hour. Sweet were those moments unblemished and untamed like bird stretching their feathers to take another flight in ecstasy.

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Date: 9/4/2019 1:30:00 AM
Dear Asim, the type of poem you selected is NOT Qasida. “Qasida” follows all the rules and system of rhymes of Ghazal, but it is much longer (from 15 to 60 couplets even more), The rhyming of Qasida is like Ghazal AA-BA-CA-DA-EA-FA- GA-HA... and like Ghazal, it could be with and without refrain...
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Date: 1/28/2016 4:39:00 PM
That giddy, playful excitement of love is captured in this scene. Enjoyed.
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M Asim Nehal
Date: 1/29/2016 1:14:00 PM
Thanks much