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Love Affair

attentions shown them
stir yearnings - not more lonely -
arms closely hold them
kisses twinge loneliness opaque
soft trembles soften twin aches

desperate duet
quaking one evasion high  
escape needs fulfilled
~hearts crave pain blocking solace ~
covers mold two stories told

Copyright © CayCay Jennings | Year Posted 2017

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Jannie Breedt Date: 12/22/2017 3:24:00 AM You tiger you. I so love this. Reminds of Gordon Lightfoots Affair on 8th avenue song Fictionally speaking it smacks of great passion and deep romance. Oh boy..... Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 12/22/2017 9:36:00 AM I did sensual good, huh? So glad you thrilled to it. Thanks I give you now for reading so many of my writes. Beyond sweet, you are. Meow ... CayCay

Susan Ashley Date: 12/20/2017 9:27:00 PM Feeling Hot Hot Hot... Wow CayCay, a beautiful and sophisticated write of a steamy affair of wondrous passion.. Superb. Best wishes for a win my talented friend. Warmest wishes for a merry Christmas and happy New Year! Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 12/22/2017 9:37:00 AM Thank you so much, Susan, for the word, 'superb.' I feel superb after find such a generous comment. As ever, all the best to you ... CayCay

Janice Canerdy Date: 12/19/2017 1:34:00 PM Well-done, CayCay! Janice Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 12/22/2017 9:37:00 AM Thank you, Janice - I appreciate you very much. All the best ... CayCay

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 12/19/2017 11:34:00 AM Wow CayCay! I wish I could write a Tanka this brilliant! They are a real challenge for me. Best luck in the contest! : ) Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 12/22/2017 9:39:00 AM How is my favorite Connie? You brat, we both know you have brilliant tankas in you! I do thank you and value you, and so much more, all good! Love ... CayCay

Kim Rodrigues Date: 12/19/2017 8:12:00 AM Very nice! A sensuous write! Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 12/19/2017 8:15:00 AM A sensuous reader! Just kidding. Have a delightful day, Kim. Thank you for commenting. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

John Gondolf Date: 12/19/2017 4:39:00 AM Affairs can be very passionate but it’s still not love. John Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 12/19/2017 8:18:00 AM Yes, sir and no, sir, you are correct on both accounts. Passion and love together are ideal, but my write is fiction concerning an affair, so all passion until ........... someone gets hurt. I hope you are having a beautiful day in Tejas. All the best ... CayCay

Rhoda Tripp Date: 12/19/2017 4:26:00 AM Ohhhhhh....Hot! Very tastefully written. Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 12/19/2017 7:37:00 AM I did hot! How about that? Too hot to handle. Silly this morning. I've done my 5 challenge, just not posting for awhile. It was a lot of fun, Rhoda. Have a great day ... CayCay