Love Advice - Revised

If it seems your love life's a mess

and you're feeling romantic distress.

        What you have to do

        is find somebody new

which would help solve your problem, I guess!

That may not be easy to do

if you're looking for love that is true.

        But you must keep in mind

       the one you finally find

should be deeply in love with you too!

Your love life should be a success,

don't ever settle for less

       if there's mutual respect

       then you can expect

very little romantic stress.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Junique Avatar
July 27, 2011 at 2:30 AM
Words of wisdom. I really enjoy the feeling i got after reading this poem. Congratulation on your win.
Sweetheart Avatar
July 25, 2011 at 3:18 PM
Congrats Ralph on your HM in the contest with this super lovely poetry my friend.. always awesome luv..enjoy special honor...
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July 24, 2011 at 4:23 PM
congrats on your win in the contest, some wise words here :-)
Roberts Avatar
July 23, 2011 at 11:09 PM
great advice, congrats on your win in the contest
Johnson Avatar
July 23, 2011 at 10:50 PM
What wise advice. Very nice Ralph. congratulations. And thank you for your many kind comments. Love, Joyce
Neels Avatar
July 22, 2011 at 11:02 AM
This is so cool Ralph, I need to memorise your advice ;) congratulations on your win in Brian's contest ;) lfde Wilma
Brown Avatar
July 22, 2011 at 10:11 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Brian Strand's contest "Aspects Of Love" contest Ralph. Love, Carol
Haick Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 7:40 AM
Wow! Excellent Rhyme, Ralph and your words do hold "truth". Thanks for the comments. Peace, Audrey
Courter Avatar
September 10, 2010 at 10:07 PM
I liked it it applies to most people today that settle for less
Brown Avatar
September 10, 2010 at 12:11 PM
What a beautiful day to sit and read poetry here at PoetrySoup. Please keep writing and sharing your poems with us. What a diverse group of poets we have here I am so happy you are one of us Ralph. Have a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
September 9, 2010 at 7:38 PM
Humor and inspiration combine with advice. Nicely composed. I hope it is" mutual respect and not resprect". Ralph
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September 9, 2010 at 7:32 PM
lol love the spirit of your write, you said it "don't settle for less" lol, and the ending made me giggle, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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