LOVE, A CRAZY ROLLER COASTER RIDE


How can one describe a feeling of pure ecstasy, a feeling
Of floating in the clouds, a thrill which wildly energises
You, and detaches you from reality when he says,
I love you.

How can we describe love, it is an overwhelming rush of
Adrenaline, a crazy feeling that makes you feel out of control,
Worldwide, love is alive and thriving, a feel good emotion,
I love you.

There is magic in the word love, like a potion whose ingredients 
Intoxicate you, the heavens send out celestial sounds of harps,
As three simple, but forever after words are spoken,
I love you.

The depth  and holistic feeling of love sinks deep, pure joy,
It encompasses you, stardust in your eyes, you do not feel steady
Rather somewhat heady, dizzy, euphoric, to hear him say the words,
I love you.

The moon seems so close and big, sparkling with love ,  you
Tremble with excitement, the heavens dark and the stars brilliant,
 an intense contrast, then he kisses you with such electric passion,
I love you.

Your heart by now captivated, you can already feel the two of you
Merging, it starts to rain – thunder, lightning – pyrotechnics light the sky,
You both run for cover, you slip and nearly fall, he grabs you just in time,
I love you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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George Avatar
June 28, 2026 at 10:10 PM
Wonderful ! How we experience the mad rush of adrenaline through our senses when we hear someone saying- "I love you." Yes, it is a magic mantra we have been waiting to hear from one who has been reigning your heart for long. You have beautifully enumerated the subtle nuances of love. I really enjoyed this sweet poem on love. All blessings to you, dear Jenny.
Kendrick Avatar
June 28, 2026 at 11:19 AM
Ahh!! A reminded of what love can be. Thanks for sharing, Sara K.
May Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 8:00 AM
A roller coaster of emotions. Lovely write Jennifer
Dietrich Avatar
June 14, 2026 at 2:20 PM
What a wonderful life and love affirming poem. I knew that feeling just a few times. There is nothing like it.
Ball Avatar
May 21, 2026 at 12:24 AM
Absolutely beautiful Jennifer. Love this. God Bless, JB
Kauffman Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 11:58 AM
Dearest Jennifer, indeed there is magic in the word "love," and in your delightful, romantic poem as you and your lover run for cover in a rain storm. Beautiful image. Hope you are well. Sending you bunches of blessings!
One Avatar
May 17, 2026 at 8:30 AM
Hello my sweet friends, always a pleasure to see you posting and I always appreciate your sincere support... your poetically describe the overwhelming feeling of love in your poem and this is love many would carve to have.... Sending you peace and blessings..
Edmonds  Avatar
May 16, 2026 at 6:21 PM
That’s lovely Jennifer, love is a roller coaster, many ups and downs, yet love will always remain safe and sound… Beryl
Cunningham Avatar
May 16, 2026 at 11:24 AM
It's a magical feeling for sure Jennifer, the world needs a lot of it now. Takes me back when you first hear those words from someone, you feel ten feet tall Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
May 16, 2026 at 10:36 AM
Love this! I think that before these words escape, two have spent much time with one another. Said too quickly, it may not be real. With a lifetime of marriage, it becomes more weighty. Still, the stars in the eyes, the swoon, the moon overhead…ahh
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