Love

My love is a practicing ascetic
So humble beyond imagination
Many view his beliefs as pathetic
He, as a duty, determination
 
A man filled with incredible knowledge
His selfless offerings far from shallow
Studied at a prestigious college
For his beliefs, he faces the gallow

People often ridicule, nonchalant
Some furtive in manner, some quite vicious
Ne'er comprehending nature so gallant
Alas, self-serving their own ambitious 

So why do I feel my own hearts desire
Is being led directly to the fire
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ashley Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 8:09 PM
A beautifully expressed sonnet Donna. The use of the required words melts into the allure of your poem. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. ~Susan
Roberts Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 9:23 PM
Dear Susan ~ I appreciate the kind words~
Roper Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 6:36 PM
Congratulations on your win, Donna, nicely done and enjoyed reading. Hugs Eve ~`*
Roberts Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 7:06 PM
Thanks for taking the time for a #7 EVE , Glad u enjoyed!
Gauthier Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 2:29 PM
Congrats on your win, Donna.
Roberts Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 2:32 PM
Xo
Hamilton Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 8:23 AM
Congrats Donna for a fine placement in my contest!
Roberts Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 12:16 PM
Many thanks, John
Roberts Avatar
February 9, 2018 at 10:40 AM
Thank you...especially since you are internationally known.I appreciate you taking the time to comment.
Horsman Avatar
February 9, 2018 at 10:05 AM
a classic love story,Donna. ever so well written.
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January 20, 2018 at 9:34 AM
Great sonnet for the contest Donna..
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