Love

her flesh surrender

adores his rough masculine ...

turns his male heart soft

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 2/16/2018 9:49:00 AM

What a sweet, loving dedication! Just beautifully penned! All the best, my friend! Pandita

David Smith

Date: 1/25/2018 3:40:00 PM

Amazing what just what a few well written lines can convey. Magic. Sorry I have not looked at your work for so long. Best regards David in NZ

David Smith

Date: 1/25/2018 3:40:00 PM

Amazing what just what a few well written lines can convey. Magic. Sorry I have not looked at your work for so long. Best regards David in NZ

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/21/2018 1:30:00 AM

What a .loving gift to honor Tim CayCay! Is this the one you were speaking of for the haiku contest? xxoo : )

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 1/18/2018 2:58:00 AM

Enjoyed this very much, my friend ... dichotomy and ambiguity, two of my favorite things! Blessings, friend! :-) <3

CayCay Jennings
Date: 1/18/2018 8:10:00 PM

Thank you. I looked up dichotomy; I'd forgotten the definition and have meant to relearn it for some time now. I wonder, are all oxymorons examples of dichotomy, but not all dichotomy statements, oxymorons? Your turn to get me thinking, it is a wonderful thing. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/17/2018 5:21:00 PM

The power and the touch, you sure bring it on, CayCay, love this haiku..

CayCay Jennings
Date: 1/18/2018 8:14:00 PM

Thank you for such an exhilarating response, yepper - I just close my eyes and feeling brings the Haiku! I am grateful for its reception, which I can't gauge with eyes closed. All the best ... CayCay

John Gondolf

Date: 1/16/2018 10:34:00 AM

Nicely written, CayCay, her feminine traits and his masculine traits create the perfect union. Best of luck. John

CayCay Jennings
Date: 1/18/2018 8:12:00 PM

Thank you, John - I enjoyed your comments almost as much as knowing you've managed to carve out some personal time. All the best ... CayCay

Rhoda Tripp

Date: 1/15/2018 7:32:00 PM

I absolutely LOVE these words, CayCay. I can even envision "softly tough" because I think I've been there and it was beautiful.

CayCay Jennings
Date: 1/15/2018 10:35:00 PM

It thrills me to have written a Haiku many have either felt or strongly wish to feel; you and I are in the have column, and right you are, it is beautiful. I'm blessed to be with my have every day. Get yourself one! Kidding, I have no idea when the time will be right for that, for any person. I know I waited for decades to be who I needed to be. Thank you so much for sharing your reactions, it means volumes. Hugs ... CayCay

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 1/14/2018 3:59:00 PM

Very witty and unique, love it CayCay;-)

CayCay Jennings
Date: 1/15/2018 6:36:00 PM

Thank you, Keith - I don't think we've ever crossed paths, other than spotting you in some places so good to meet you and thank you for your comment. It is about the man I love, the 'finally' right man whose love makes it so easy to write about love - after 5 years I can truly say that w/o any hesitation! Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Silent One

Date: 1/14/2018 12:40:00 PM

Damn..This one is great...What a moment that would be...

CayCay Jennings
Date: 1/15/2018 6:37:00 PM

Damn do I love your comment. It was a great moment I shared and still do with Tim, my blessing long awaited. Thank you, one who deserves such a moment ... CayCay

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/14/2018 8:30:00 AM

Very well done, CayCay. Looks like a winner to me.

CayCay Jennings
Date: 1/15/2018 6:39:00 PM

I appreciate you saying such, it means a lot to me. I'm never sure with Haikus - what is and isn't correct because it seems to be a matter who you are talking to/reading, etc. As with other things, I hope to someday have Haiku clarity! Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/13/2018 8:39:00 PM

I can't think of the word for it when you put two mismatched words together. but that was really cool how you did it. Do you know what I am talking about? it has a term and I really ought to know it!!

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/17/2018 8:43:00 PM

haha, I actually SAW this reply from you. That may be the word I meant oxy moron. hahaha

CayCay Jennings
Date: 1/13/2018 9:17:00 PM

Are you saying my haiku is a moron, Ms. Oxy? Are you going to read this?

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