Love

It's driving me crazy these filliings inside, my heart screams out for you my thoughts i can't hide, its killing me slowly eachtime your around, you might see me happy but underneath is a frown, A life full of sarrow, hurting and pain my nights I think of you, it's just not the same, it's hard to love someone that doesn't love back, it's hard to move on, the courage I lack, a never ending love that dosent love back...

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/26/2016 8:19:00 AM

Destiny,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 6/26/2016 8:05:00 AM

Destiny,, well done, thank you for sharing your thoughts through words. *skat*

Destiny Udave
Date: 6/26/2016 8:09:00 AM

ur welcome Thank u for the comment

Manmath Dalei

Date: 6/26/2016 4:39:00 AM

Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead...........//:) hugs