Constance La France Poet Dodoitsu

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''Love''

Days the son stayed by the bed
and with his hand on his dads
heart, he felt the last flutter-
       love is forever.

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January 12, 2016

Dodoistu/"Love"
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It's a Dodo Kinda Day
Francine Roberts

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James Inman September 29, 2018 at 11:09 AM Hadn't read this one before, it brought back memories.

Poet Destroyer A January 26, 2016 at 10:35 PM Broken, Nice winning poem, Love - LINDA - Constance La France January 27, 2016 at 8:49 AM Linda, thanks for the compliment and the love !

Scott Williams January 19, 2016 at 11:26 PM Really beautiful, BW. Congrats on your win. Constance La France January 20, 2016 at 7:52 AM Scott, thanks so much for the congrats and the beautiful, oh it was a very sad day for this nurse ~

Skat A January 18, 2016 at 9:13 AM Broken, Congratulations on your win. ---SKAT :) Constance La France January 18, 2016 at 12:53 PM Skat thanks so much for the congrats

Anisha Dutta January 17, 2016 at 11:35 PM Congrats B.O. to win the contest. Anisha D Constance La France January 18, 2016 at 6:47 AM Anisha, I know you mean BW, well hope so anyways, and if so thanks so much for the congratulations ~

Beautiful Scars January 17, 2016 at 1:44 PM Broken Wings, congrats on your placement :) *smiles* -luloo Constance La France January 17, 2016 at 3:00 PM Laura, thanks for visiting and for the congrats and the smiles !

Paul Callus January 17, 2016 at 11:49 AM I cannot but echo your title, Constance....sad yet beautiful! Indeed a worthy winner! Congratulations:) ~ Regards // paul Constance La France January 17, 2016 at 3:02 PM Paul, thank you so much for visiting with that lovely comment, this was taken from life, recently one of my patients died and this is what his son did, it was so emotional, and so sadly beautiful, and thanks for the congratulations ~

White Sage January 13, 2016 at 10:54 AM excellent write BW, best of luck in the contest Constance La France January 13, 2016 at 12:07 PM Sage, thanks for the excellent !

Dr. Upma A. Sharma January 13, 2016 at 3:51 AM This is so so heartfelt n emotional broken.. Gl in contest! Constance La France January 13, 2016 at 7:52 AM Upma, thanks for visiting with that nice comment and support, appreciate !