Love

Was something incredible happening?
Was this our life’s real story?
Or a changing reality,
That brought our love together,
Was it the growing towards death?
Making us face life,
Strengthening our hearts,
Helping us to understand,
As we gave to each other,
All that we were,
Reading each other as a book,
Was this going to be an adventure?
Or a happy ending with romance,
Could we dance in eternity’s heaven forever?
Only time tells the tale,
And history revealing her whole truth,
Comforting and reassuring each other,
Through the power of love,
That would never fade
An everlasting powerful force,
Only eternity’s love! 
Would know.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Muideen Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 11:53 AM
What a very great descriptive my friend. So much truth lies within your wonderful and brilliant write.............A.M.
Rycroft Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 6:56 AM
Thank you for taking the time to read my poems x thank you for your comment x wendy
Mumo Avatar
October 28, 2015 at 4:04 AM
A great description of an elusive subject - love. A well-deserved 7+!
Rycroft Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 8:41 AM
Thank you for your comment, sorry it's taken me too long to get back to you I have not been on the internet for a while x xxx
La France Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 6:12 PM
Wendy, so romantically beautiful, a lovely 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, A Home is more than a House ~~
Rycroft Avatar
October 24, 2015 at 2:42 PM
Sorry for not getting back so soon x thank you for your comment and the great encouragement x
Sirak Avatar
October 19, 2015 at 7:37 AM
A beautiful expression of true love. Well done.
Rycroft Avatar
October 19, 2015 at 8:14 AM
Thank you for your kind comment x thank you xxxx
Tor Avatar
October 18, 2015 at 11:16 PM
Beautifully written Wendy. Love is a wonderful feeling emotion that engulfs the heart and brings it alive to another level. Enjoyed your write very much.
Rycroft Avatar
October 19, 2015 at 7:09 AM
Thank you Michael For you kind comments and taking the time to pass by xxx Wendy
Kendrick Avatar
October 18, 2015 at 6:54 PM
True love is hard to find but you seem to have found it and have expressed it well in this work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Dunn Avatar
October 18, 2015 at 5:46 PM
the tree and it is still watched over today. Now in our culture this child would have been called a gifted seeker of the future and honored by modern people, but it is a different culture that the Amish have so you see, the differences in these two societies. I hope this helps my friend. And yes I read alot, but I also research over the net, cheri
Dunn Avatar
October 18, 2015 at 5:43 PM
So when things started going badly the priest of the villiage blamed this poor child and he planted a tree to keep the witch boy imprisoned forever with a blessing spoken over his body, but a hundred years to the day of this planting a sudden storm broke out and a lightning bolt split the tree in half releasing the spirit of the seeker as I call him, and the curse began, again, so the new priest of the villiage did as the old but with more respect, and a guardian was placed to watch over the
Dunn Avatar
October 18, 2015 at 5:40 PM
Dear Wendy The Amish people believe that to be born with the power of esp, or second sight is against the laws of God, they believe you've been given this power by the devil. So when this child the boy was born with this gift, he was banished to the forest outside the village and left to die, a blind child sense birth, he had no chance to survive, not even in death did they give him a descent burial he was buried out in a field. So the legend says his spirit cursed the people of the village,
Rycroft Avatar
October 20, 2015 at 10:07 PM
Thank you for this explanation it's very interesting x
Smith Avatar
October 18, 2015 at 4:53 PM
Beautiful Wendy. Feelings that will never fade...lovely
Rycroft Avatar
October 18, 2015 at 5:10 PM
Thank you Tim that's very kind of you for taking the time to read x wendy
Dunn Avatar
October 18, 2015 at 10:51 AM
Dear Wendy Love the passionate feeling in this work, love is a positive force in the universe, and we whom have such true love and devotion in our lives are the luckest people in the world, it's an everlasting light never to be extingushed or put out, love the inspirational content in this work, cheri
Rycroft Avatar
October 18, 2015 at 10:56 AM
Thank you Cheri so much x God Bless you xx Wendy
Nehal Avatar
October 18, 2015 at 8:24 AM
Wonderfully written poem, I liked it....To quote frok your poem: Through the power of our love, Feelings that would never fade, An everlasting force, That only eternity would know.
Rycroft Avatar
October 18, 2015 at 10:22 AM
Thank you so much, That's very kind of you x Wendy
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