Love

The smile in your eyes Tender things you always do Makes me realise You mean the whole world to me I love you eternally
08~24~14 Written for Faith, Hope and Love Tanka Contest sponsored by Regina Riddle ~awarded 1st place~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A   Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 10:05 AM
Hi Jan, Thank You For replying to my comment :) LINDA
Mehta Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 1:30 AM
Great sentiments on love, congrats, Jan
Allison Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 4:13 AM
Many thanks for your lovely comment Dr Mehta:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Gibson Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 6:26 PM
Jan, beautiful sentiments in this lovely write. Congratulations.
Allison Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 6:30 PM
Thanks for dropping by Faye i do appericate it:-) hugs jan xx
De La Luna Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 6:16 PM
This is lovely, Jan! Congrats! :)
Allison Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 6:29 PM
many thanks for your lovely comment:-) Hugs Jan xx
Mcintosh Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 6:16 PM
Love it, Jan :) Love and prayers, Gina
Allison Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 6:28 PM
Thanks for dropping by Gina I do appreciate it:-) Hugs Jan xxx
A  Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 4:46 PM
Hey Jan, Congratulations, on your winning Tanka, SKAT LOVE
Allison Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 4:47 PM
Thanks so much for dropping by Skat:-) Hugs jan xx
A   Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 1:53 PM
Jan,,, Congrats on your "Hope, Faith and Love Tanka win." Love Linda
Allison Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 2:01 PM
Thanks so much Linda I am delighted:-) Hugs jan xxx
Yvonne Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 1:41 PM
you are so deserving. you knew you wrote a great piece and now that truth is verified. i am silly happy for you.
Allison Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 4:48 PM
Thanks Maurice that comment truly has meant the world to me:-) hugs Jan xx
Yvonne Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 2:17 PM
i just met you and i'm proud of you. most important though you should be proud of yourself. i love your writing and as a theatre director i believe i am a good judge of talent. there are quite a few very talented writers here. cheers mate!
Allison Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 1:50 PM
Maurice you are too kind with your praise. Tim smiths romantic write inspired me and this was the result:-) I am still on cloud 9 form my clouds win - I just can't believe the success I'm having - my poetry partner Darren will be so proud of me:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Haight Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 1:19 PM
Hi Jan -- congratulations to you for 1st place with your Love Tanka. Wonderful words that really express the meaning of love in so few words! Sandra
Allison Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 1:22 PM
thank you so much for you kind words Sandra:-) Hugs jan xx
Meier-Hans Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 12:42 PM
Congratulations Jan. Beautiful. Brenda
Allison Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 12:43 PM
Thanks Brenda it is so lovely to see our names on the podium:-) Hugs Jan xx
Smith Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 11:31 AM
Congrats Jan...you keep shining..... Hugs Tim
Allison Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 11:40 AM
so do you my friend:-) hugs Jan xxx
Davis Avatar
August 25, 2014 at 9:53 PM
Jan So few words but with a heart full of love, caring, passion and emotion. Love is the best feeling someone can give. thank you for the nice comment on my Fish poem.
Allison Avatar
August 26, 2014 at 3:04 AM
Thank you so much Robin. I am inspired by wonderful romantic writes so thought i would give it a go I am so pleased you enjoyed it:-) Hugs Jan xx
Sirak Avatar
August 25, 2014 at 5:31 AM
Sweet and tender. Every line shouts "love"
Allison Avatar
August 25, 2014 at 7:27 AM
Aww thank you so much Monterey - I am not really much good at romantic poems but am trying hard and learning all the time:-) hugs Jan xx
Roberts Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 11:24 PM
Lovely words Jan ......Seren
Allison Avatar
August 25, 2014 at 3:42 AM
Thanks Seren I don't really write much romantic poetry so this was great to do for a change:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Thomas Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 11:53 AM
A short and sweet poem that makes me smile... :)
Allison Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 5:51 PM
Thanks Angie:-) hugs Jan xx
Yvonne Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 11:07 AM
just beautiful. i love these words.
Allison Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 5:51 PM
Thanks for the lovely comment Maurice:-) Hugs jan xx
A. Sharma Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 10:54 AM
Jan u hv really gone so very romantic my friend! Love ur write much! Good luck dear!
Allison Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 5:50 PM
I am learning all the time Dr Sharma:-) thanks for the lovely comment. hugs jan xxx
Nance Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 10:13 AM
Aww super sweet, i love it
Allison Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 5:50 PM
Thank you Casarah I am inspired by Tim's romantic poems:-) Hugs jan xx
Smith Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 9:34 AM
I'm rubbing off on you...romantic Jan....hugs Tim
Allison Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 9:37 AM
Yes you are Tim:-) and my perceived nortiness is rubbing off on you so we have the best of both worlds now! :-) Hugs Jan xxx
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