Love

The smile in your eyes Tender things you always do Makes me realise You mean the whole world to me I love you eternally 08~24~14 Written for Faith, Hope and Love Tanka Contest sponsored by Regina Riddle ~awarded 1st place~

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/29/2014 10:05:00 AM

Hi Jan, Thank You For replying to my comment :) LINDA

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/29/2014 1:30:00 AM

Great sentiments on love, congrats, Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 8/29/2014 4:13:00 AM

Many thanks for your lovely comment Dr Mehta:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Faye Gibson

Date: 8/28/2014 6:26:00 PM

Jan, beautiful sentiments in this lovely write. Congratulations.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/28/2014 6:30:00 PM

Thanks for dropping by Faye i do appericate it:-) hugs jan xx

Hija De La Luna

Date: 8/28/2014 6:16:00 PM

This is lovely, Jan! Congrats! :)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/28/2014 6:29:00 PM

many thanks for your lovely comment:-) Hugs Jan xx

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 8/28/2014 6:16:00 PM

Love it, Jan :) Love and prayers, Gina

Jan Allison
Date: 8/28/2014 6:28:00 PM

Thanks for dropping by Gina I do appreciate it:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Skat A

Date: 8/28/2014 4:46:00 PM

Hey Jan, Congratulations, on your winning Tanka, SKAT LOVE

Jan Allison
Date: 8/28/2014 4:47:00 PM

Thanks so much for dropping by Skat:-) Hugs jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/28/2014 1:53:00 PM

Jan,,, Congrats on your "Hope, Faith and Love Tanka win." Love Linda

Jan Allison
Date: 8/28/2014 2:01:00 PM

Thanks so much Linda I am delighted:-) Hugs jan xxx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 8/28/2014 1:41:00 PM

you are so deserving. you knew you wrote a great piece and now that truth is verified. i am silly happy for you.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/28/2014 4:48:00 PM

Thanks Maurice that comment truly has meant the world to me:-) hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 8/28/2014 2:17:00 PM

i just met you and i'm proud of you. most important though you should be proud of yourself. i love your writing and as a theatre director i believe i am a good judge of talent. there are quite a few very talented writers here. cheers mate!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/28/2014 1:50:00 PM

Maurice you are too kind with your praise. Tim smiths romantic write inspired me and this was the result:-) I am still on cloud 9 form my clouds win - I just can't believe the success I'm having - my poetry partner Darren will be so proud of me:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Sandra Haight

Date: 8/28/2014 1:19:00 PM

Hi Jan -- congratulations to you for 1st place with your Love Tanka. Wonderful words that really express the meaning of love in so few words! Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 8/28/2014 1:22:00 PM

thank you so much for you kind words Sandra:-) Hugs jan xx

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 8/28/2014 12:42:00 PM

Congratulations Jan. Beautiful. Brenda

Jan Allison
Date: 8/28/2014 12:43:00 PM

Thanks Brenda it is so lovely to see our names on the podium:-) Hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 8/28/2014 11:31:00 AM

Congrats Jan...you keep shining..... Hugs Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 8/28/2014 11:40:00 AM

so do you my friend:-) hugs Jan xxx

Robin Davis

Date: 8/25/2014 9:53:00 PM

Jan So few words but with a heart full of love, caring, passion and emotion. Love is the best feeling someone can give. thank you for the nice comment on my Fish poem.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/26/2014 3:04:00 AM

Thank you so much Robin. I am inspired by wonderful romantic writes so thought i would give it a go I am so pleased you enjoyed it:-) Hugs Jan xx