Notes About The Poem

Poetic Form: Sonnet
Inspired: 2024 May 02

 

*2nd Place*
Sonnet - Untraditional
Contest Judged: 2024 May 11
Sponsored by: Constance La France

 

Video: Oliver by YT

Love

"One word frees us of all the weight and pain of life. The word is love. Sophocles, Greek Poet ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ Tanked temps pools inky smears ere striking lights, nightstand shelved as bed post warming invites, facade postpones ceiling beams gold strike streaks, soleless soul flits swarming countenance cheeks, dance preps off-Broadway show and a bit more, mirror laughs hushed, smiles aloud, assured score. ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ Hogwarts seedbed on windows, one attends, self-mocked reflect face, sees the village ends, pressed off, Hogwarts seedbed--windows, returns, swings, tick, chime, digital, sands, time-take-turns, midday passes, pinks-whites-brown creamy melts, boredom still on, chips and pops up, rain pelts. ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ Ain't an, Acro..., Aero..., Aquaphobic, Where is love? Heal this ... Agoraphobic.
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La France Avatar
May 12, 2024 at 3:03 PM
Hilo, wonderful writing, very creative and congratulations on your win in my contest, I love the video too, Constance
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
May 12, 2024 at 3:51 PM
Thanks for its mention and Happy Mother's Day, Constance. Aloha, William
Kendrick Avatar
May 12, 2024 at 9:53 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in Constance's contest winners' list. Way to go. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
May 12, 2024 at 10:28 AM
My thanks, Sara, for your considerations. Have a Happy Mothers Day, Aloha, William
Goldsmith Avatar
May 12, 2024 at 8:33 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative write. Yes, "Where is love?" Many ask this questions. Enjoy your day with your wonderful win.............
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
May 12, 2024 at 10:27 AM
I am pleased by your thought-filled sentiments, Paula, jave a Happy Mother's Day, Aloha, William
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