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what is wrong with me what is my issue why am i so in love with you when will i stop where will i be if i dont what shall become of me when i let you take my heart these are the questions that race through my love ridden heart these are the songs that ring through my solem ears these are the words that flow through me these are the cries of my faithful dreams if there is love will it come to me if there is time will it be mine if that is so, where will i be if the world just collapsed if my heart just died if my eyes just closed if i just fell these are the questions that race through my love ridden heart these are the songs that ring through my solem ears these are the words that flow through me these are th ecries of my faithful dreams will you love me too will you take my heart will i stop asking my self these questions will this ever end will you sing to me will it be about mermaids and fairies will you really love me will i really trust you what is wrong

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Date: 6/18/2009 9:33:00 AM
This is very emotinal. There is a place and time for everything to bloom and develop into something beautiful. Be patient and leave the heart open. Good work!
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Date: 6/17/2009 3:44:00 PM
I LOVE THIS POEM SO MUCH!!!!! ITS MY FAVORITE ONE OUT OF ALL OF THEM, AND YOU HAVE SOME AMAZING POEMS!!!!
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