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Love

love is a melody love complicated yet so easy It is an ability, not a feeling It is a giver, not a taker It's your heart rate going a little bit faster It's that warmth, you feel deep inside love like life, has its ups and downs love like critics can be misunderstood Love is that x-factor that draws you back love is the extra pain you feel when you've been hurt by the one you love love isnt selfish nor mean love isnt fair nor plain true love lasts against all obtacles true love listens, understands and comforts.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/1/2008 2:39:00 AM
Hi Tanya, that was a bomb, and i really love the simplicity of the lines, you're welcome to poetry soup. love Gbenga. You can also log on to my page, i have tu. poems at the moment
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Date: 10/14/2008 6:44:00 PM
Glad you've come to PoetrySoup with your writing Tanya and this is a most wonderful word to begin with ... smile ... hope to read lots more!!
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Date: 10/12/2008 8:54:00 AM
This is an excellent poem. I like how the title resonates throughout the poem, and how the essence of love is reinforced. Great job and welcome to Poetry Soup! ~Joseph
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Date: 10/7/2008 4:23:00 PM
Yes, true love does last. Wonderful message in last line. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time here. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 10/7/2008 11:41:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful and filled with truth. My favorite line is "It is a giver, not a taker". Welcome to PoetrySoup! Look forward to more of your poetry. Love, Shar
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