Love - a Life Captured In Itself

A world more of tears then smile,

devastating emotions like a blast,

I want to live happily inside my nest,

but the thoughts wobble my conscious at last.

 

Just a tiny period of ecstasy,

leaves unbearable pain when it ends,

I have lost my self-confidence,

gearing every time for this dissimilar trends

 

A world where blood has no importance,

emotions clatters like dust in carpet,

I have lost my way in muddle,

Believing color green as scarlet .

 

It was your fault

why you left me with pain to surmount,

I was standing there for days,

where you left with anger which was stout

 

I am still sitting alone with trashed emotion,

hoping you will revive my scar,

with every drop of tear falling down

my heart cries and say…....Why me Yaar*

 

 

 

 

 
Yaar*........It is a word use in Hindi language for "Friend"
 


This is a poem from my third poetry book............"Why me yaar"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 4/1/2012 12:58:00 PM
Wonderfully written sir! you have such an amazing talent for sure :) keep writing!
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Diwakar Pokhriyal
Date: 4/1/2012 1:35:00 PM
Thank you very much Jazz :).....For sure I will take your words...and keep writing!.........and please don't call me Sir......friend would be much better :)....Thanks again :)
Date: 3/28/2012 12:14:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this afternoon Diwakar. I am reading today and hoping to find some inspiration to write. I had a run a week or so ago and now it wimped out on me. Thank you for posting your poetry and sharing it with others. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/28/2012 1:07:00 PM
Thanks Carol :).................Please don't say Thank you to me. I am a budding poet and I love to write poetry. Writing poetry is my passion and I enjoy doing it. I love to get comments about my poetry so that I can keep on improving myself :)...enjoy the poems :)
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