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Love, Silly Love, Wasted Love, But Still Love

He moved away. She promised she'd love him forever. He still, don't know.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/31/2011 3:10:00 PM
Perhaps you can alter the last line to "He doesn't know". Either way, this was strong. Your potential in your Haiku lines is strong. Keep it up. :)
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