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Love, Silly Love, Wasted Love, But Still Love

He moved away.
She promised she'd love him forever.
He still, don't know.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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December 31, 2011 at 3:10 PM
Perhaps you can alter the last line to "He doesn't know". Either way, this was strong. Your potential in your Haiku lines is strong. Keep it up. :)
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