Lousy Letter

I’m writing to you, my dear darling one
To say life with you is no longer fun
We laughed ‘til we cried, made love until sore
But you’ve become just a great crashing bore
Spontaneity has now up and died 
I can’t bear the thought of you by my side
I know I should say this in person, not ink
But distance is better, because, well - you stink!
There’s no more to add, nothing else to do
I’ll end this missive with a Toodleloo 


Written for Brian Strand's "My Dear" contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 2/18/2010 5:34:00 PM
How cute! A goodbye lover letter.
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Date: 12/23/2009 12:12:00 PM
Interesting goodbye letter. Keep the magical and creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 11/18/2009 8:50:00 AM
Hi, Corinne...is this a song too? I'm thinking it might be good as a country western...lots of humor. BIG LOVE, daver
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Date: 11/15/2009 9:09:00 AM
Cute letter Corinne and giving one the "boot" in such a perfect way... OK.... happy I decided to read this Sunday before football games consume my day... luv... and good luck in Brian's contest... I also entered my Livid Letter to the Landlord contribution of all things not pertaining to my own personal dwelling... luv again... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/13/2009 1:51:00 PM
LOL awwww it's nicer to say it in person (poke) have you made me a concrete verse for Oh What A Shape I'm in..hmmmm maybe an anchor? a xmas ball! Light & Love
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Date: 11/12/2009 11:58:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest Corinne.Rgds Brian
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Date: 11/12/2009 4:37:00 PM
I am so happy that your excellent poetry was included in my day of enjoyable reading. May you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration Corinne. Wishing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol
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