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Lousy Is Feeling

much like a squeezed up toothpaste tube, no knotted nothing in you, just tightly twisted emptiness; much like a beer can, you're flattened down and out on the pavement by truck tires again and again; much like your tattered, old denim jeans, dry and faded, with large holes cruelly torn at the knees; much like crumpled paper, you're tossed out and away into the trash bin, useless, totally forgotten.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




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