Lounging Around

Lounging around on those long summer days
A cloudless blue sky, so calm and serene.
A buzz in the air, a bee makes his way
As we lay there dozing, living the dream.

Echoes of yelling, of children at play,
Haring around in the hot summer sun.
Sun worshipers bask for most of the day,
Some burned to a crisp, the paler ones dun.

Late afternoon, some respite from the heat
Now time for the food, the barbecue's lit.
Then wafts the aroma, as flame sears meat
The chicken impaled, turns round on the spit.

Dad dishes the food, he thinks he's the chef
Each standing in line awaiting their turn.
Mother though knows she'll be cleaning the mess,
She winces, watching the sausages burn.

Come early evening it's time to wind down
Children now fractious, soon time for their beds.
Dads got a beer, saying he's done his bit
Mother looks on smiling, shaking her head.








Best Rhyming Poem in March - 
Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by Laura Loo
3/04/2018.  Placed 4th.
(Poem posted 3/12/2018)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 1:05 PM
Congrats on you win, Gary. A fun read.
Smith Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 1:17 PM
Thank you Line :)
Gentry Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 8:08 PM
Congratulations on your win with this well-written poem.
Smith Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 4:47 AM
Thank you Susan :)
Rodrigues Avatar
April 5, 2018 at 5:30 PM
An awesome description! A great time!
Smith Avatar
April 5, 2018 at 5:41 PM
Thank you Kim :)
Roper Avatar
April 5, 2018 at 5:25 PM
Excellent write Gary, with great imagery .. congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
Smith Avatar
April 5, 2018 at 5:27 PM
Thank you Eve :)
Scars Avatar
April 5, 2018 at 10:16 AM
I can't wait for these days, the lazy and hazy days of summer! I love the smell of the air and the grilling every night. Loved your poem, thank you and congrats on your placement! :)-luloo
Smith Avatar
April 5, 2018 at 10:49 AM
Thank you Laura :)
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