Lounging Around

Lounging around on those long summer days
A cloudless blue sky, so calm and serene.
A buzz in the air, a bee makes his way
As we lay there dozing, living the dream.

Echoes of yelling, of children at play,
Haring around in the hot summer sun.
Sun worshipers bask for most of the day,
Some burned to a crisp, the paler ones dun.

Late afternoon, some respite from the heat
Now time for the food, the barbecue's lit.
Then wafts the aroma, as flame sears meat
The chicken impaled, turns round on the spit.

Dad dishes the food, he thinks he's the chef
Each standing in line awaiting their turn.
Mother though knows she'll be cleaning the mess,
She winces, watching the sausages burn.

Come early evening it's time to wind down
Children now fractious, soon time for their beds.
Dads got a beer, saying he's done his bit
Mother looks on smiling, shaking her head.








Entry for EARLY MAR 18 STANDARD CONTEST,
ANY FORM OR NONE, ANY THEME,UP TO A MAX OF 20 LINES
Judged 9/3/2018.    Placed 1st
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Allison Avatar
March 18, 2018 at 6:28 AM
absolutely charming Gary, I love the imagery and the humour especially with the burnt sausages and dad's beer:-) hugs jan xx
Smith Avatar
March 18, 2018 at 7:11 AM
Thank you Jan :)
Sands Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 3:29 PM
Written well Gary. It has me longing for summer :)
Smith Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 3:32 PM
Thank you Heidi :)
Smith Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 1:34 PM
Reposted as I accidentally deleted it. :)
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