Louisiana Porch

The air blows nicely through my Louisiana porch 
I could sit for hours and never check the time 
It’s perfect to watch the sun shine 
The cows are in the pasture, my dog is just a foot behind 
Rocking in this old chair takes me to a simple state of mind 

I don’t mind having company but don’t miss it if it ain't there 
You can challenge me to a game of poker if you dare 
Some call me a drunk 
Some call me mean 
But I say I'm somewhere in between 

My old bird dog is the only love I have ever known 
And there is no one sweeter than she
I call her Miss Gracie lea

My Louisiana porch is home to me 
I would not trade my simple life for fame or money 
For my view of the country is sweeter then honey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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Brown Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 11:09 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Lauren. Love Carol
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February 24, 2011 at 9:18 AM
Congrats on your beautiful poem being featured this week. I wish you many successes. -Mohammad
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February 21, 2011 at 3:43 PM
Congrats on the feature. I had a bayou friend in the navy. He used to talk about home. I'd tell him about coal country and he'd tell me about Louisiana. Vince
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February 21, 2011 at 1:43 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Lauren. Love, Carol
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May 3, 2009 at 2:09 PM
Lauren, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
Brown Avatar
April 10, 2009 at 5:48 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals Lauren. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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November 8, 2008 at 3:36 PM
A lovely poem -very soothing to read. The life it describes is most enchanting, indeed. I myself crave for this life, which I know, I can't have. There is a certain inconspicuous gloom behind your poem which could not be hidden from my eyes. Heartiest congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Please correct a typing error in the fifth line from the last. Best wishes. -Mohammad
Austin Avatar
November 4, 2008 at 4:44 AM
Is this written in semi-dialect, Lauren? Your organization tells me it must be. Boy, do I love the simplicity of this piece. Congrats on the choice. Love, daver
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November 3, 2008 at 8:35 AM
Wow I just love this poem. Congratulations Lauren on your featured write of the week. Love, Shar
Jordan Avatar
November 3, 2008 at 5:36 AM
Lauren - Wonderful poetry - Great job - congrats on being featured this week - God Bless
Brown Avatar
November 3, 2008 at 4:43 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week. Love, Carol
George   Avatar
November 2, 2008 at 6:01 PM
Brilliant! You have camptured this form in all its simple beauty. lainie
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November 2, 2008 at 5:09 PM
Congratulations Laura on "Louisiana Porch" being featured. It loooks like you got what is important in perspective. God Bless. Vince
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