Louisiana I Have Sinned

Louisiana Rev had a session,
with a girl in the oldest profession.
Was found with his pants down,
on the wrong side of town.
His next sermon became his confession.





7/21/19
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Allison Avatar
September 13, 2019 at 1:35 AM
this would have been my number 1!:-) Absolutely brilliant in every way:-) hugs Jan xx
Rushing Avatar
September 13, 2019 at 6:18 PM
Thank you Jan!
Dietrich Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 5:24 PM
this is AWESOME. Congrats on the winner list, Wren
Rushing Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 5:40 PM
Thank you Andrea have a wonderful evening my friend!
Gauthier Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 7:46 PM
Very well penned, Wren. Congrats on your well deserved win.
Rushing Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 5:38 PM
Thank you Line!
Wolf Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 4:21 PM
Wren, I think that this is just perfect!! Surprised a bit that it didn't land in the #1 position. I think that Geoffrey Chaucer would have picked it #1. Great limerick! A FAVE for me. :) gw
Rushing Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 5:37 PM
Thank you Gershon!
Awtry Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 10:35 PM
The Art of Swag ;)
Lawless Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 9:17 AM
...or indictment!!!
One Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 8:03 AM
Great limerick Wren..
Allison Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 4:41 AM
hilarious!:-) hugs Jan
Cunningham Avatar
July 21, 2019 at 3:15 AM
Love it Wren, we all have needs, even the Reverend lol. Tom.
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