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Louisiana

Heading east, after Arizona,
through New Mexico and past
the wide Lone Star state,
greens shade from dull to bright.
The desert was pale pastels
and heat devoid of moisture.
Here, humid bayou flora flourish
in black and steamy soil where 
hurricanes hit the coast, winds 
flatten sugar cane, and two 
rich-brown nutrias cross a placid canal.
Their wakes, on the still surface, are 
clean and nearly perfect inverted 
V's.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Thomas Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 2:49 PM
My home :) it's like you've been here ;•)
Richards Avatar
May 5, 2011 at 5:22 PM
Descriptions are marvelous...., although, can't imagine the terror and havoc and the heartbreak of the hurricane's aftermath! Great poem! (ps...thanks for catching my "Oh Susanna error...lol....Susanna might not like being called "old!" :) Thanks again...I don't know what I was thinking!
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