Loud Mouth

Inspired by Machinehead – Darkness Within (Acoustic version) & members of society who refuse to embrace the kiss of silence…

As great intentions
Wither upon invalidated declarations,
Serenity’s crowd holds teary-eyed candles
Making silent wishes
For the venom to be sucked
Out

Loudness’ waxy build-up
Making filthy demands
In delegated hostage stand-off
To be HEARD

Cocked pistols, insignificant
Firing duds against glasshouses
Rubbing “war-torn” palms
Within cemented rubber bands

Forgetting life’s lesson
To shut their raging mouth
If they truly want to be heard

Amnesia’s warning sign to muzzle thyself
For one meaningful second
To ALLOW a merging of disappointed truths
Into their heartbeats

Salvation’s attempt to stifle boiling pressures of Sangre
From coming face to face with reality scythes

They latch onto plastic rosary beads
Fade to Black
Singing Gregorian prayers,
Removing knife from karma’s back

They strum in vain to please the Lord.

We see your true colors
Shining through

We see your true colors
That’s why we can no longer love you

Placing forced expectations 
Against vulnerable humanity
To lay weary heads on curtailed shoulder pads

With foolish attempts to swallow moot points
And pride-coated defibrillators
To jump start a heartbeat, extinct

Forgetting that even self-made pedestals
Have a limited warranty

I see your true colors
Shining through…

©Drake J. Eszes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Walker  Avatar
January 31, 2014 at 4:53 PM
Wow is the expression of a loud mouth. Slams well! Dark Sunshine
Tacito Avatar
January 31, 2014 at 10:57 PM
Thank you, Verlena. Nice to meet you.
Retro Avatar
December 10, 2013 at 8:52 AM
Wow have you ever been so amazed you were speechless... And all you could do was laugh in its amazement
Tacito Avatar
December 10, 2013 at 8:55 AM
From time to time, yes. :) That's a very kind comment, Denise. Thank you for that.
Guzzi Avatar
November 4, 2013 at 3:06 PM
Always so much to chew on in your verses Drew, such a thoughtful person. Light & Love
Tacito Avatar
November 4, 2013 at 3:45 PM
Nice to see you again, Debbie. It's been awhile. i appreciate it!
Jones Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 7:54 AM
Yep another doozy! Love the fourth stanza...actions speak louder than words..ALWAYS....my moms favorite saying....
Tacito Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 8:04 AM
I fully concur, Donna. Thank you so much. :)
Sirak Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 1:14 PM
Some poems really lend themselves to the spoken word. This is a powerful perfect slam poetry piece. The words surprise and strike the emotions. I can close my eyes and imagine hearing it.
Tacito Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 7:51 PM
That's awesome. I always try to hear how I would read what I write in my head. Though, in this piece, I was much bolder than usual. :) Thanks so much, Monterey!
Ober Avatar
September 17, 2013 at 10:52 AM
LOVE THIS!!! I'm so glad you contacted me this week - It was the push I needed to get my butt on here to read some damned good poetry ;) You are just too good at these religious jabs. "Removing knife from karma's back." Awesome!
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September 17, 2013 at 11:02 AM
HEY THERE!!! =D Ha! How awesome is that! "Religious jabs"...HA! I love it. The Agnostic in me is applauding loudly. Thank you so much, Heather! So great to see you again!
Devnath  Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 12:29 PM
It's a excellent poem. Very nicely penned. Loved always, bl
Tacito Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 1:38 PM
Hey BL! Thanks much!
Kithinji Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 10:35 AM
'... foolish attempts to swallow moot points'...not the gravamen.
Tacito Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 10:37 AM
Indeed. Thanks, Gerald!
Lamoureux Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 9:11 AM
Good morning Drake, I reworked my poem if you have a chance take another look at it. Thanks for catching my error, much appreciated.
Tacito Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 9:25 AM
No problem! :) That's what I'm there for! =D
Onclaud Avatar
September 14, 2013 at 2:00 PM
enjambment at its best, drake...edgy, mind blowing imprints that strip pretense in order to seek authenticity...brain-freeze in a heartening way!.. that's how it feels!.. you grabbed me!.. darn good read!..:) huggs
Tacito Avatar
September 14, 2013 at 8:00 PM
Awesome, awesome! =D You have no idea how grateful I am to hear that. Thank you so much, Nette!!!
Ellison Avatar
September 13, 2013 at 7:33 AM
You is da man, Mr, Drake! Another masterpiece from our P-Soup poet extraordinaire! Kudos my good friend!
Tacito Avatar
September 13, 2013 at 7:35 AM
That is so appreciated, Jack! =D Thank you so much.
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September 13, 2013 at 6:58 AM
I see you are a cyndi Lauper fan. I love her true colors song. I again am moved by your words Drake, you possess a great gift. Thanks for sharing it with us.
Tacito Avatar
September 13, 2013 at 7:31 AM
I kind of am. She's still a great performer today. She was actually here in Sacramento a few weeks ago. I'm very happy you enjoyed this. That always means so much. Thank you kindly, Richard.
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September 12, 2013 at 6:25 PM
Hey Drake, Well said buddy....Nice write.. Ken
Tacito Avatar
September 12, 2013 at 6:26 PM
Hey Ken! Nice to see you again! Thank you much! :)
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September 12, 2013 at 4:14 PM
I love Cindy's word for your poem, "Intense", yes this is quite the tense and intense write my friend! Yes, true colors are shining through, do we all know what they are? Are we true to ourselves? And I really enjoyed the lines, "Forgetting that even self-made pedestals, Have a limited warranty" This is so true when you really think on it! This poem is tremendous, I loved reading this amazing poem this evening! Great Work!!
Tacito Avatar
September 12, 2013 at 6:11 PM
Thank you so very much, Russell! =D We try to know what all the true colors are. Sometimes, we're right. Most of the time, no. I'm glad you stopped by here!
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September 12, 2013 at 3:37 PM
I can hear you roar..'Loud mouths ..chatter boxes.. busybodies mind your own busineds.Who are you to say what s good and bad..to think you re better than anybody else..to judge and claim salvation is yours'.Maybe im.mislead..but im hearing this bzzzz..bzzzzz: )You made me think of a saying 'Empty vessels make boast sounds'. powerful and pogniant. To embrace the kiss of silence'+Excellent
Tacito Avatar
September 12, 2013 at 4:05 PM
Pretty spot on, Charmaine. Your saying is a pretty accurate take on the message here. Thank you so very much!!! =D
Lu Avatar
September 12, 2013 at 11:56 AM
geeze are you intense!.... I enjoyed reading this one of yours alot!!! Such powerful stanzas here, gripping emotion, it's really good. And BTW, thanks for your comment on Pardon Me As I Puke... LOL, oh, my world for a nice fella with an altoid in his front pocket... lmao, thanks, Cindy
Tacito Avatar
September 12, 2013 at 2:00 PM
Hey Cindy!!! =D Thanks so much for that! Altoids, HAHAHAHA YES! I had to say it. It's really the right thing to do. =D You're very welcome, also!
Mcdaid Avatar
September 12, 2013 at 10:26 AM
excellent piece of writing i tip my hat
Tacito Avatar
September 12, 2013 at 10:27 AM
I tip mine back to you. Thanks so much, Liam! =D
Andresen Avatar
September 12, 2013 at 10:09 AM
.... thankfully .... some are color blind .... (I'm not) - Most roses have thorns. - Very well written Drake!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Tacito Avatar
September 12, 2013 at 10:11 AM
Absolutely!!!! I couldn't agree more. =D Thank you, Anne Lise!
Manassian Avatar
September 12, 2013 at 9:11 AM
Ok....SOUP MAIL! :)
Manassian Avatar
September 12, 2013 at 12:26 PM
yea....another one....Ha ha....better change this title to blabber mouth.... ;-)
Tacito Avatar
September 12, 2013 at 9:47 AM
:)
Mehta Avatar
September 12, 2013 at 8:38 AM
An enjoyable slam, Drake
Tacito Avatar
September 12, 2013 at 8:48 AM
Hey, Dr! Thank you very much for that.
Manassian Avatar
September 12, 2013 at 8:22 AM
Drake....You TELL 'EM....Presuming, of course..I'm not part of the THEM! ;) WOW! Powerful words....SLAM indeed. There you go quoting Cyndi....TRUE COLORS....Drake...YOUR true colors shine through....and....you know the rest. ;) Ok...you...soup mail about the show. Give me ten minutes...I'm Skyping, but had to check to see if you'd posted or not...SOON!
Tacito Avatar
September 12, 2013 at 8:33 AM
LOL never, ever think that you're a part of this. I would straight up tell you privately if it ever were. I don't do online, personal call-outs. That's just...strange. Only good stuff & good people would I call out like that. =D Thank you so so so so much, Eileen! Stay awesome! Ok, look forward to hearing from you!
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