Loud Mouth

Inspired by Machinehead – Darkness Within (Acoustic version) & members of society who refuse to embrace the kiss of silence…

As great intentions
Wither upon invalidated declarations,
Serenity’s crowd holds teary-eyed candles
Making silent wishes
For the venom to be sucked
Out

Loudness’ waxy build-up
Making filthy demands
In delegated hostage stand-off
To be HEARD

Cocked pistols, insignificant
Firing duds against glasshouses
Rubbing “war-torn” palms
Within cemented rubber bands

Forgetting life’s lesson
To shut their raging mouth
If they truly want to be heard

Amnesia’s warning sign to muzzle thyself
For one meaningful second
To ALLOW a merging of disappointed truths
Into their heartbeats

Salvation’s attempt to stifle boiling pressures of Sangre
From coming face to face with reality scythes

They latch onto plastic rosary beads
Fade to Black
Singing Gregorian prayers,
Removing knife from karma’s back

They strum in vain to please the Lord.

We see your true colors
Shining through

We see your true colors
That’s why we can no longer love you

Placing forced expectations 
Against vulnerable humanity
To lay weary heads on curtailed shoulder pads

With foolish attempts to swallow moot points
And pride-coated defibrillators
To jump start a heartbeat, extinct

Forgetting that even self-made pedestals
Have a limited warranty

I see your true colors
Shining through…

©Drake J. Eszes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 1/31/2014 4:53:00 PM
Wow is the expression of a loud mouth. Slams well! Dark Sunshine
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Poet Tacito
Date: 1/31/2014 10:57:00 PM
Thank you, Verlena. Nice to meet you.
Date: 12/10/2013 8:52:00 AM
Wow have you ever been so amazed you were speechless... And all you could do was laugh in its amazement
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Date: 12/10/2013 8:55:00 AM
From time to time, yes. :) That's a very kind comment, Denise. Thank you for that.
Date: 11/4/2013 3:06:00 PM
Always so much to chew on in your verses Drew, such a thoughtful person. Light & Love
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Date: 11/4/2013 3:45:00 PM
Nice to see you again, Debbie. It's been awhile. i appreciate it!
Date: 9/24/2013 7:54:00 AM
Yep another doozy! Love the fourth stanza...actions speak louder than words..ALWAYS....my moms favorite saying....
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Date: 9/24/2013 8:04:00 AM
I fully concur, Donna. Thank you so much. :)
Date: 9/22/2013 1:14:00 PM
Some poems really lend themselves to the spoken word. This is a powerful perfect slam poetry piece. The words surprise and strike the emotions. I can close my eyes and imagine hearing it.
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Date: 9/22/2013 7:51:00 PM
That's awesome. I always try to hear how I would read what I write in my head. Though, in this piece, I was much bolder than usual. :) Thanks so much, Monterey!
Date: 9/17/2013 10:52:00 AM
LOVE THIS!!! I'm so glad you contacted me this week - It was the push I needed to get my butt on here to read some damned good poetry ;) You are just too good at these religious jabs. "Removing knife from karma's back." Awesome!
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Date: 9/17/2013 11:02:00 AM
HEY THERE!!! =D Ha! How awesome is that! "Religious jabs"...HA! I love it. The Agnostic in me is applauding loudly. Thank you so much, Heather! So great to see you again!
Date: 9/16/2013 12:29:00 PM
It's a excellent poem. Very nicely penned. Loved always, bl
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Date: 9/16/2013 1:38:00 PM
Hey BL! Thanks much!
Date: 9/15/2013 10:35:00 AM
'... foolish attempts to swallow moot points'...not the gravamen.
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Date: 9/15/2013 10:37:00 AM
Indeed. Thanks, Gerald!
Date: 9/15/2013 9:11:00 AM
Good morning Drake, I reworked my poem if you have a chance take another look at it. Thanks for catching my error, much appreciated.
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Date: 9/15/2013 9:25:00 AM
No problem! :) That's what I'm there for! =D
Date: 9/14/2013 2:00:00 PM
enjambment at its best, drake...edgy, mind blowing imprints that strip pretense in order to seek authenticity...brain-freeze in a heartening way!.. that's how it feels!.. you grabbed me!.. darn good read!..:) huggs
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Date: 9/14/2013 8:00:00 PM
Awesome, awesome! =D You have no idea how grateful I am to hear that. Thank you so much, Nette!!!
Date: 9/13/2013 7:33:00 AM
You is da man, Mr, Drake! Another masterpiece from our P-Soup poet extraordinaire! Kudos my good friend!
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Date: 9/13/2013 7:35:00 AM
That is so appreciated, Jack! =D Thank you so much.
Date: 9/13/2013 6:58:00 AM
I see you are a cyndi Lauper fan. I love her true colors song. I again am moved by your words Drake, you possess a great gift. Thanks for sharing it with us.
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Date: 9/13/2013 7:31:00 AM
I kind of am. She's still a great performer today. She was actually here in Sacramento a few weeks ago. I'm very happy you enjoyed this. That always means so much. Thank you kindly, Richard.
Date: 9/12/2013 6:25:00 PM
Hey Drake, Well said buddy....Nice write.. Ken
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Date: 9/12/2013 6:26:00 PM
Hey Ken! Nice to see you again! Thank you much! :)
Date: 9/12/2013 4:14:00 PM
I love Cindy's word for your poem, "Intense", yes this is quite the tense and intense write my friend! Yes, true colors are shining through, do we all know what they are? Are we true to ourselves? And I really enjoyed the lines, "Forgetting that even self-made pedestals, Have a limited warranty" This is so true when you really think on it! This poem is tremendous, I loved reading this amazing poem this evening! Great Work!!
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Date: 9/12/2013 6:11:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Russell! =D We try to know what all the true colors are. Sometimes, we're right. Most of the time, no. I'm glad you stopped by here!
Date: 9/12/2013 3:37:00 PM
I can hear you roar..'Loud mouths ..chatter boxes.. busybodies mind your own busineds.Who are you to say what s good and bad..to think you re better than anybody else..to judge and claim salvation is yours'.Maybe im.mislead..but im hearing this bzzzz..bzzzzz: )You made me think of a saying 'Empty vessels make boast sounds'. powerful and pogniant. To embrace the kiss of silence'+Excellent
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Date: 9/12/2013 4:05:00 PM
Pretty spot on, Charmaine. Your saying is a pretty accurate take on the message here. Thank you so very much!!! =D
Date: 9/12/2013 11:56:00 AM
geeze are you intense!.... I enjoyed reading this one of yours alot!!! Such powerful stanzas here, gripping emotion, it's really good. And BTW, thanks for your comment on Pardon Me As I Puke... LOL, oh, my world for a nice fella with an altoid in his front pocket... lmao, thanks, Cindy
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Date: 9/12/2013 2:00:00 PM
Hey Cindy!!! =D Thanks so much for that! Altoids, HAHAHAHA YES! I had to say it. It's really the right thing to do. =D You're very welcome, also!
Date: 9/12/2013 10:26:00 AM
excellent piece of writing i tip my hat
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Date: 9/12/2013 10:27:00 AM
I tip mine back to you. Thanks so much, Liam! =D
Date: 9/12/2013 10:09:00 AM
.... thankfully .... some are color blind .... (I'm not) - Most roses have thorns. - Very well written Drake!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/12/2013 10:11:00 AM
Absolutely!!!! I couldn't agree more. =D Thank you, Anne Lise!
Date: 9/12/2013 9:11:00 AM
Ok....SOUP MAIL! :)
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Date: 9/12/2013 12:26:00 PM
yea....another one....Ha ha....better change this title to blabber mouth.... ;-)
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Date: 9/12/2013 9:47:00 AM
:)
Date: 9/12/2013 8:38:00 AM
An enjoyable slam, Drake
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Date: 9/12/2013 8:48:00 AM
Hey, Dr! Thank you very much for that.
Date: 9/12/2013 8:22:00 AM
Drake....You TELL 'EM....Presuming, of course..I'm not part of the THEM! ;) WOW! Powerful words....SLAM indeed. There you go quoting Cyndi....TRUE COLORS....Drake...YOUR true colors shine through....and....you know the rest. ;) Ok...you...soup mail about the show. Give me ten minutes...I'm Skyping, but had to check to see if you'd posted or not...SOON!
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Date: 9/12/2013 8:33:00 AM
LOL never, ever think that you're a part of this. I would straight up tell you privately if it ever were. I don't do online, personal call-outs. That's just...strange. Only good stuff & good people would I call out like that. =D Thank you so so so so much, Eileen! Stay awesome! Ok, look forward to hearing from you!
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