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Lou Was His Name

There's a guy I knew whose name was Lou Who made his home at the local zoo. Animals were his life He was free of much strife His stench nearly knocked you out, its true Alexis Y. 5-13-16

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Jan Allison

Date: 5/16/2016 4:47:00 PM

Great humour Alexis - ugh I can just imagine the stink lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.
Date: 5/16/2016 5:02:00 PM

Hi Jan, I'm glad you saw it as humorous. I enjoy your limericks they are always so darn funny and well written. Lou's stench could probably be smelt on Mars. Thank you so much for stopping by-Alexis

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/15/2016 5:27:00 AM

Very funny dear Alexis! Some days ago I wrote a Limerick about a guy as well. Wonderfully written! A seven

Alexis Y.
Date: 5/16/2016 8:58:00 AM

Hi Demetrios, I'm glad you so it as funny. I will stop by your page to see your limerick. T.F.T.S - Alexis

Peter Dome

Date: 5/15/2016 2:53:00 AM

Ha ha this is brilliant Alexis, and so fyny well done. Pete,

Alexis Y.
Date: 5/15/2016 3:11:00 AM

Hi Peter, I'm glad you enjoyed it. What could Lou do? He lived at the zoo. Cologne just made him smell worse. Thanks for stopping by my friend- Alexis