Lou Was His Name

There's a guy I knew whose name was Lou
Who made his home at the local zoo. 
Animals were his life
He was free of much strife     
His stench nearly knocked you out, its true








Alexis Y.
5-13-16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Allison Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 4:47 PM
Great humour Alexis - ugh I can just imagine the stink lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Y. Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 5:02 PM
Hi Jan, I'm glad you saw it as humorous. I enjoy your limericks they are always so darn funny and well written. Lou's stench could probably be smelt on Mars. Thank you so much for stopping by-Alexis
Trifiatis Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 5:27 AM
Very funny dear Alexis! Some days ago I wrote a Limerick about a guy as well. Wonderfully written! A seven
Y. Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 8:58 AM
Hi Demetrios, I'm glad you so it as funny. I will stop by your page to see your limerick. T.F.T.S - Alexis
Dome Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 2:53 AM
Ha ha this is brilliant Alexis, and so fyny well done. Pete,
Y. Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 3:11 AM
Hi Peter, I'm glad you enjoyed it. What could Lou do? He lived at the zoo. Cologne just made him smell worse. Thanks for stopping by my friend- Alexis
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