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Lotus For Sloping Knees

LOTUS FOR SLOPING KNEES ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, the contentment of disheveled twigs sitting on shoulders of humming trees, the sunlight wafting shades on meshed nets--- it is before early morning, pale always ever, pagan and pliant as the swoon of winged winds. after all, while village trawlers tug the day’s haul of buttery clams, salmon and weeds, the river washes its feet unobserved. even when the hills fondle the peaks of embossed leaves, there is no time for human leisure on the streams, not yet. not till compass’ hours stray too long, tedious, unabated for folk fishermen to haul the orb ropes and slug aquatic baits in exile, washed from sea wine that cradles trout’s liberty… many a time, when incandescent beam envelopes all things gentle and sunlight drifts on lotus flowing, rowing; as clouds hover odorless upon sloping male knees: fishermen become the fishes darting free, finally tranquil… content as disheveled twigs lying on shoulders of humming trees. ,,,,,,,,……………………………………,,,,,, © all rights reserved

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Date: 7/18/2012 5:55:00 PM
a magical mystery tour nette. Congrad's on winning through round one. Light & Love
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Date: 7/18/2012 8:45:00 AM
a dreamy mind blanche.....really brings the reader in .....schneikies! a winner in the first Int'l round, congrats! Nette! jimbo
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Date: 7/18/2012 8:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through round one of the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest. I wish you the best in the finals Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/28/2011 5:42:00 PM
Beyond beautiful.
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Date: 7/27/2011 10:26:00 PM
Very creative and beautiful words, Nette.Sorry I don't have time to soupmail ya these days. On a very tight schedule with hubbie home lately.He has some job interviews tomorrow. WIsh us luck as our bills pile up! Luv, andrea
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Date: 7/27/2011 6:30:00 PM
quite the creative and choreographed piece you have netted us with. The sunlight is wafting it's poetic shades on you Nette! excellent
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Date: 7/27/2011 2:32:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this expressive and creative work this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by and letting me know that I placed in the contest..Sara
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Date: 7/27/2011 1:09:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry today Nette. I enjoyed reading it and will be back again soon to read more. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/27/2011 9:26:00 AM
A full 7for you!
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Date: 7/27/2011 9:25:00 AM
Amazing poetry with superb choice of words Nette.Is this for any contest?Best wishes.
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