Hello There Poet Verse

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Lost Without You

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O Soul of mine,
find your way back to me;
prove you’ve not forgotten
our days spent by the sea.

So long…
are they gone forever,
endlessly?
Do you pine, despite lost time,
for peace and harmony?

Depleted without; 
you took leave, denying dreams.
I hoped and prayed you’d find your way;
I waited patiently.

Perceive this profound loss;
I ache incessantly.
Restore this bond;
a new flame spawn -
please, bring Love home to me.

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10/8/19
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Sponsored by Emile Pinet

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Eve Roper October 20, 2019 at 4:40 PM Congratulations on your win. Hugs Hello There October 20, 2019 at 11:19 PM Thank you very much, Eve :) hugs

Sandra Adams October 19, 2019 at 10:08 PM congrats on your placement in Emile's contest :) hugs Hello There October 19, 2019 at 11:49 PM Thank you so much, my sweet friend <3 hugs :)

John Hamilton October 19, 2019 at 5:11 PM Congrats HT on this poem being recognized in Emile's contest, enjoyed! Hello There October 19, 2019 at 11:46 PM Thank you so much, John ~ melancholy, just the way you like it ;)

Emile Pinet October 19, 2019 at 1:36 PM Congratulations Hello There! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest. This contest was very tough to judge, for I was very strict, well done my friend, Emile. Hello There October 19, 2019 at 11:45 PM My gosh ~ I am so happy and honored, Emile. Thank you so much for considering my poem worthy of placement and for leaving this lovely comment here for me. I'm tickled pink :)

Jennifer Proxenos October 11, 2019 at 4:42 PM Very romantic Hello There - you are longing for your love to return, 'please, bring Love home to me - Hope she returns! Hugss, Jennifer. Hello There October 11, 2019 at 6:17 PM Ah, thank you so much, Jennifer! That's a sweet thing to say :) hugs

Arturo Michael October 10, 2019 at 9:05 AM O Soul of mines...Lovely write Hello There October 10, 2019 at 10:34 AM Thank you so much, Arturo ~ :) I think I shall change my first line, my friend ;)

Chris Green October 9, 2019 at 7:57 AM Such a soulful and pleading poem for love to return to your life. The ache of loss could be strongly felt in your wonderful poem my friend. Hello There October 9, 2019 at 12:31 PM Thank you, my friend, I really appreciate your feedback and kindness :)

Winged Warrior October 8, 2019 at 8:48 PM WoW! a hauntingly beautiful write HT...very well executed my friend...^WW^ :o) Hello There October 8, 2019 at 9:16 PM Thank you, ^WW^ ~ I really appreciate your visit and kind words :-)

Mystic Rose Rose October 8, 2019 at 4:02 PM How can God resist a prayer such as this , penned to perfection. I enjoyed your poem Hello. Hello There October 8, 2019 at 5:11 PM I am so pleased you enjoyed this, Pixie Dust, and thank you for the beautiful compliment. Also, thank you for popping in and making my day brighter :)

Sandra Adams October 8, 2019 at 9:23 AM one can really feel the longing in this one... the image really does go well with your words my friend, great penning! hugs Hello There October 8, 2019 at 10:17 AM Thank you, Sandra ~ Yes, the picture tells a lot, I think :) hugs

Vijay Pandit October 8, 2019 at 7:12 AM The photo speaks eloquently in your poem, HT..superbly depicted poem of longing. Hello There October 8, 2019 at 10:15 AM Thank you so much, my dear friend ~ I really appreciate it :)

Heidi Sands October 8, 2019 at 6:35 AM I pray for love to come home to you! Well expressed. Have a nice day :) Hello There October 8, 2019 at 10:14 AM Aw, sweet ~ Thank you, Heidi :) You have a lovely day, too <3

Anne-Lise Andresen October 8, 2019 at 4:14 AM - Like a beautiful prayer, H.T. ... a pleasure to read :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Hello There October 8, 2019 at 10:13 AM Thanks so much, Anne-Lise :) hugs

Regina Mcintosh October 8, 2019 at 1:48 AM Beautifully written. I enjoyed it so much. It's a gem. Bless you always with love and prayers, Gina Hello There October 8, 2019 at 1:52 AM Thank you so much, Gina, for all of your kind words and support ~ I really appreciate it <3