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~~~~~~~~~~ O Soul of mine, find your way back to me; prove you’ve not forgotten our days spent by the sea. So long… are they gone forever, endlessly? Do you pine, despite lost time, for peace and harmony? Depleted without; you took leave, denying dreams. I hoped and prayed you’d find your way; I waited patiently. Perceive this profound loss; I ache incessantly. Restore this bond; a new flame spawn - please, bring Love home to me. ~~~~~~~~~~ 10/8/19 Give Me Your Best New Poem Contest Entry Sponsored by Emile Pinet

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Eve Roper

Date: 10/20/2019 4:40:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Hugs

Hello There
Date: 10/20/2019 11:19:00 PM

Thank you very much, Eve :) hugs

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/19/2019 10:08:00 PM

congrats on your placement in Emile's contest :) hugs

Hello There
Date: 10/19/2019 11:49:00 PM

Thank you so much, my sweet friend <3 hugs :)

John Hamilton

Date: 10/19/2019 5:11:00 PM

Congrats HT on this poem being recognized in Emile's contest, enjoyed!

Hello There
Date: 10/19/2019 11:46:00 PM

Thank you so much, John ~ melancholy, just the way you like it ;)

Emile Pinet

Date: 10/19/2019 1:36:00 PM

Congratulations Hello There! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest. This contest was very tough to judge, for I was very strict, well done my friend, Emile.

Hello There
Date: 10/19/2019 11:45:00 PM

My gosh ~ I am so happy and honored, Emile. Thank you so much for considering my poem worthy of placement and for leaving this lovely comment here for me. I'm tickled pink :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/11/2019 4:42:00 PM

Very romantic Hello There - you are longing for your love to return, 'please, bring Love home to me - Hope she returns! Hugss, Jennifer.

Hello There
Date: 10/11/2019 6:17:00 PM

Ah, thank you so much, Jennifer! That's a sweet thing to say :) hugs

Arturo Michael

Date: 10/10/2019 9:05:00 AM

O Soul of mines...Lovely write

Hello There
Date: 10/10/2019 10:34:00 AM

Thank you so much, Arturo ~ :) I think I shall change my first line, my friend ;)

Chris Green

Date: 10/9/2019 7:57:00 AM

Such a soulful and pleading poem for love to return to your life. The ache of loss could be strongly felt in your wonderful poem my friend.

Hello There
Date: 10/9/2019 12:31:00 PM

Thank you, my friend, I really appreciate your feedback and kindness :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 10/8/2019 8:48:00 PM

WoW! a hauntingly beautiful write HT...very well executed my friend...^WW^ :o)

Hello There
Date: 10/8/2019 9:16:00 PM

Thank you, ^WW^ ~ I really appreciate your visit and kind words :-)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/8/2019 4:02:00 PM

How can God resist a prayer such as this , penned to perfection. I enjoyed your poem Hello.

Hello There
Date: 10/8/2019 5:11:00 PM

I am so pleased you enjoyed this, Pixie Dust, and thank you for the beautiful compliment. Also, thank you for popping in and making my day brighter :)

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/8/2019 9:23:00 AM

one can really feel the longing in this one... the image really does go well with your words my friend, great penning! hugs

Hello There
Date: 10/8/2019 10:17:00 AM

Thank you, Sandra ~ Yes, the picture tells a lot, I think :) hugs