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~~~~~~~~~~ O Soul of mine, find your way back to me; prove you’ve not forgotten our days spent by the sea. So long… are they gone forever, endlessly? Do you pine, despite lost time, for peace and harmony? Depleted without; you took leave, denying dreams. I hoped and prayed you’d find your way; I waited patiently. Perceive this profound loss; I ache incessantly. Restore this bond; a new flame spawn - please, bring Love home to me. ~~~~~~~~~~
10/8/19 Give Me Your Best New Poem Contest Entry Sponsored by Emile Pinet

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Date: 10/20/2019 4:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Hugs
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Date: 10/20/2019 11:19:00 PM
Thank you very much, Eve :) hugs
Date: 10/19/2019 10:08:00 PM
congrats on your placement in Emile's contest :) hugs
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Date: 10/19/2019 11:49:00 PM
Thank you so much, my sweet friend <3 hugs :)
Date: 10/19/2019 5:11:00 PM
Congrats HT on this poem being recognized in Emile's contest, enjoyed!
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Date: 10/19/2019 11:46:00 PM
Thank you so much, John ~ melancholy, just the way you like it ;)
Date: 10/19/2019 1:36:00 PM
Congratulations Hello There! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest. This contest was very tough to judge, for I was very strict, well done my friend, Emile.
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Date: 10/19/2019 11:45:00 PM
My gosh ~ I am so happy and honored, Emile. Thank you so much for considering my poem worthy of placement and for leaving this lovely comment here for me. I'm tickled pink :)
Date: 10/11/2019 4:42:00 PM
Very romantic Hello There - you are longing for your love to return, 'please, bring Love home to me - Hope she returns! Hugss, Jennifer.
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Date: 10/11/2019 6:17:00 PM
Ah, thank you so much, Jennifer! That's a sweet thing to say :) hugs
Date: 10/10/2019 9:05:00 AM
O Soul of mines...Lovely write
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Date: 10/10/2019 10:34:00 AM
Thank you so much, Arturo ~ :) I think I shall change my first line, my friend ;)
Date: 10/9/2019 7:57:00 AM
Such a soulful and pleading poem for love to return to your life. The ache of loss could be strongly felt in your wonderful poem my friend.
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Date: 10/9/2019 12:31:00 PM
Thank you, my friend, I really appreciate your feedback and kindness :)
Date: 10/8/2019 8:48:00 PM
WoW! a hauntingly beautiful write HT...very well executed my friend...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 10/8/2019 9:16:00 PM
Thank you, ^WW^ ~ I really appreciate your visit and kind words :-)
Date: 10/8/2019 4:02:00 PM
How can God resist a prayer such as this , penned to perfection. I enjoyed your poem Hello.
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Date: 10/8/2019 5:11:00 PM
I am so pleased you enjoyed this, Pixie Dust, and thank you for the beautiful compliment. Also, thank you for popping in and making my day brighter :)
Date: 10/8/2019 9:23:00 AM
one can really feel the longing in this one... the image really does go well with your words my friend, great penning! hugs
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Date: 10/8/2019 10:17:00 AM
Thank you, Sandra ~ Yes, the picture tells a lot, I think :) hugs
Date: 10/8/2019 7:12:00 AM
The photo speaks eloquently in your poem, HT..superbly depicted poem of longing.
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Date: 10/8/2019 10:15:00 AM
Thank you so much, my dear friend ~ I really appreciate it :)
Date: 10/8/2019 6:35:00 AM
I pray for love to come home to you! Well expressed. Have a nice day :)
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Date: 10/8/2019 10:14:00 AM
Aw, sweet ~ Thank you, Heidi :) You have a lovely day, too <3
Date: 10/8/2019 4:14:00 AM
- Like a beautiful prayer, H.T. ... a pleasure to read :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/8/2019 10:13:00 AM
Thanks so much, Anne-Lise :) hugs
Date: 10/8/2019 1:48:00 AM
Beautifully written. I enjoyed it so much. It's a gem. Bless you always with love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 10/8/2019 1:52:00 AM
Thank you so much, Gina, for all of your kind words and support ~ I really appreciate it <3