James Fraser Poet Free verse

Lost Where They Do Not Belong <> End Line Poem

Parents and spouses to their photo's they look,  Another
           hero was killed fighting for our freedom.   Lost  
                       so far from his home and family,   Today
       we continue to send our sons and daughters,   But
                                there will come a day when,   They
                                      will live as free as we do.   Will
                         we ever learn from these theatres,    Never
                       again should we out live our children.    Be
  cause' another was lost today, but they will never be,    Forgotten



" I hope i have done this form devised by Dane Ann and HG proud "




http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/war-6.php

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 14, 2014 at 7:27 AM you remind me of mt grandfather... and this very much true. :) James Fraser October 14, 2014 at 3:41 PM Wow, you'll have to tell me why I do Olive, James :)

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire February 24, 2010 at 11:26 AM Dear James, I am Very Impressed YOU capture the Essence of this Form Perfectly Most all of the ' End Line Word " POEMS I have read are done Extremely Well Yours is no Exception Dane and I Thank-YOU for YOUR Support and Participation in Our Endeavor To Create This new Form of POETRY Thank-YOU for YOUR Many Gracious Comments on My POETIC Endeavors YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG

. Dabomb™ February 22, 2010 at 6:48 PM Very memorable piece, nicely done.;)

Jacque Lee February 14, 2010 at 6:00 AM And it goes on and on............... so sad but true, good write Jjacque Lee UK

Audrey Haick February 13, 2010 at 3:41 PM A beautiful, though sad tribute to the many children who have died in useless wars! Great job with this Endline Poem, James. Peace, Audrey

Simone Segal February 13, 2010 at 1:17 PM Wonderful, great write, from a talented man, love Simone

John Loving Iii February 13, 2010 at 9:52 AM i think you have the ideal. john

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 12, 2010 at 7:34 PM Great write James.. but u need to capitalize all the end words in the poem on each line.. then resubmit for the contest.. if u read Dane Ann's blog she has given step by step rules for the capitalization.. other than that.. get ready again for the winner's circle ... luv.. Linda-Marie..

Hyle Chu February 12, 2010 at 4:33 PM Nice how the 2nd row reads as a summary and fits line by line entirely. Good flow for this form.

Sara Kendrick February 12, 2010 at 3:45 PM Great end-line write on a great topic. It is sad for parents to bury their children no matter what the reason but especially to loose a child to war. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Charmaine Chircop February 12, 2010 at 3:14 PM No always a fresh memory...A good one indeed James..beautiful poem..CHARMA

Carolyn Devonshire February 12, 2010 at 2:26 PM Amazing use of this new verse form, James!! Powerful message. Surely, it is sad when parents outlife their children, but the soldiers lost are not forgotten. Much love, Carolyn

Kim Hilliker February 12, 2010 at 2:15 PM Great write on this tough, new form. They are not forgotten.