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Date written: 06/24/2018

Lost Shangri-La

lost,
remote
shangri-la;
peaceful eden
razed by mother nature and father time.
the paradise we once knew, so far gone;
it will return
only if 
you come
back.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Kendrick Avatar
April 3, 2025 at 11:39 AM
Awesome work on the winners' list. Congratulations on your win. Way to go. Sara K
Ibeh Avatar
April 4, 2025 at 7:23 AM
Thank you very much, Sara:-)
mysore Avatar
April 2, 2025 at 7:48 PM
razed by mother nature and father time! beautiful write dear poet. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
Ibeh Avatar
April 3, 2025 at 2:10 AM
Thank you so much, Thriveni:-)
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