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Lost Potential

full of potential
like a timely three act play
the quintessential
long ago and far away
they would find no brighter day

locked close together
as if time could not move them
not knowing whether
they'd handle what was to come
their moorings became undone

hints of rejection
hiding in common place words
like introspection
repeating that's for the birds
little chance for afterwards

no use debating
their future left on that plane
evaporating
like new fallen summer rain
what once was won't be again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




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Date: 1/4/2022 9:45:00 AM
This one reminds me NG, of the architect in (The Matrix) “Hope it is the quintessential human delusion, simultaneously the source of your greatest strength and your greatest weakness” I totally get your message, but not yet ready to accept it, not because I cannot handle it, rather because my mental capacity won’t allow me, brilliant as always, cheers David
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